Erica

Hey, I'm glad to be the first to give the first review. I really like what you're saying in this poem, and it's very well written. Just a few things. ...

Personally I hate critiques that are too nice, though I tend to give them alot, how are you supposed to improve if no one tells you what to fix. No ...

Again I like it as a poem and if you want it to stay a poem I wouldn't change a thing. If it were a song though there are some ...

I like how this starts out all calm and peaceful then all dark and mad. Pretty cool. In my opinion it's kind of odd comparing things to food in this ...

I reall y liked this poem and with some more verses i can see it as a song. My only nit-pick is that there are some lines that shouln't be ...

I love this poem because it is so relateable. Or atleast it is to me. Poems dealing with emotions are usually the strongest in my opinion, this one does a ...

I like where it is going, but it could use a little more imagry in my opinion. This place sounds interesting and I would like to be able to picture ...

Wow, that was an amazingly emotional poem. Especially for someone who is just 14. When everyone else turned their backs Her single finger wiped off my tear. Even over the ...

I like this one because it shows how much you care about the people you are writting about. These are a few of my favorite lines. In a crowded room, ...

I love the graphic, but i'm glad you posted the poem by itself because it is easier to correct. First: add periods at the end of sentances and change the ...

Personaly I like the "in my dark room" line. It helps set up the mood. Stanzas could be used hear, but it is not necessarly needed. How you hear a ...

Sorry I don't have anything to critique on this. I really liked it though. Personally I would cut eaither a"all day" or "all week" from the first line. It just ...

ohh, this is so sweet. I like the pacing of this poem. Just two quick things: One:Keep the 'Cause. It may not be in the dictionary but it is used ...

I like you're unique writting style. Only thin i would change is there are no periods at the ends of most of you're sentances, and that you should have lower ...

I loved this! It was like reading a story, I couln't wait to find out what happend next. And you're rhyming was extremely well done. Lost himself in grief, he ...