Hello Fellow Writers 
I wrote this song just barely.
I hope all of you realize who you are.
-thevoiceinside
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You're Someone to Me
Your eyes can't hide your pain.
You feel like everybody has walked away.
But I'm standing here tonight
And I'm screaming out your name
Please listen to what I have to say...
You're not alone in this,
I'll never turn the other way, yet
"You"...that's who you miss.
In a crowded room, you sit alone.
Finally you decide, it's time to go home.
You've given up, you're sick of trying.
On the outside you're crying,
But on the inside you're dying.
Have you forgotten what it's like?
What it's like live,
Like to breathe,
Like to cry,
And move on?
My child, I have to tell you...
You have to be strong.
[Chorus]
You're not alone in this,
I'll never walk the other way
But you have to trust and learn
To love who you are
And forget what you've done,
Because you're someone.
Yeah, you're someone to Me!
You don't know who you are anymore
And your heart's an open sore.
You think you're helpless,
You say that you're out on your own,
You say there's nobody
To show you the way back home.
But my child, I can tell you...
You're wrong!
(Please be strong)
I never said this life would be easy,
But you my child, you have to believe.
You have to put your faith in what you can't see.
I can feel your sorrow, I can sense your pain;
I see it every time you turn and walk away.
On the outside, you're crying,
On the inside, you're dying.
You don't know who you are anymore
And your heart's an open sore.
Why have you forgotten?
Dear child of mine, I'm right here.
There's nothing you have to fear.
[Chorus]
You're not alone in this,
I'll never walk the other way
But you have to trust and learn
To love who you are
And forget what you've done,
Because you're someone.
Yeah, you're someone to Me!
Trust in Me, (echo)
Learn of Me, (echo)
Reach for Me. (echo)
Put your faith, oh--oh--
In what you can't see.
Please believe!
I'll never walk the other way,
This is what I've been trying to say.
You're someone to Me!
(Please believe)
You're everything,
Yeah, everything to Me...
(pause)
Because you're mine.
(You're mine---fade)
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I like this one because it shows how much you care about the people you are writting about. These are a few of my favorite lines.
I like these lines because it tells us what the person you're writting this to feels, explaining why you're reashuring them that they are someone.
Again, just being a good friend and showing that you care.
Showing that you understand what they're going through and you're always ready to help.
and this just sounds cool.
Great song!
Thanks, you did actually teach me something, problem is I live in Finland and you live in USA. I remmeber my the times when I lived in Atlanta, Georgia, those were my best days but know I live in a freakin hole.
But your song cured me alittle bit from the anger and sadness in me, thank you very much about that. You are a talented writer, you have a freakin awesome gift from God by makeing people feel happy.
Maybe you can change one thing to make this song even better!
Trust in Me,--------Make this echo
Learn of Me,--------Make this echo
Reach for Me.-------Make this stretched or echo as well
Great job, I will give you a star!