Emerson

I liked it, but I'm not entirely sure why. I loved the continual metaphor between confessions and money, and how it was rejected at the end... it was perfect. I'm ...

This is interesting. You have interesting word choice. Mephisto, which can be short for Mephistopheles. Crinolin is an unique word (I had to look it up even). I adore your ...

I feel like this is one of those things that I should feel all warm-fuzzy about in the end. I should say, "Wow, yeah, he's right," because you have ideology ...

Ah, darling, our pieces of writing go in the literary section, not here :) So, I'll move this over to other fiction. Also, it is a major turn off to ...

I'm glad to see you posting more, poetry especially since I enjoy poetry. Though, with you, everything is criptic and I can't understand it. I feel I shouldn't, or don't ...

I didn't like this a whole lot. You have a good idea, but I think it was improperly executed. For one, punctuate. :) Punctuation is your friend. This was more ...

I hate to say it, but I really wouldn't have understood this without the explanation. Kit,this was far too deep for even me to understand. ^_~ (And really, don't take ...

Death came swiftly That Midsummer’s night; I doubt the young girl Could put up much fight. I love the mention of Midsummer's night ^_~ But, your tense here seems off ...

This was certainly deep. I did enjoy it, but I think... it has some parts in it that don't work? Like the line "I am raped". We know this. We ...

Hahaha. I'm not sure whether to shout at you because it was horrible, or praise you because it was hilarious. I think it was good, and funny, but there is ...

This doesn't really... make sense. The last stanza didn't, at least, at the line, "waiting for more"--what is he waiting for? It seemed like a poem that you rested on ...

I didn't like it a whole lot. I think the idea was neat, but it didn't work out nicely in the poem. There wasn't much flow to it, or poetic ...

I have to say that I loved this. It was simply brilliant. I gave it a second read to comprehend it, the first time I thought, "Hell, what is all ...

This is really touching. It's kind of rough for me to read--my parents got divorced, but I was only five. For a story, this is Ok, it's in a really ...

This isn't bad! I think I'd want more, more meaning behind it, etc, but the way it was written I felt like I was falling--which is good. Keep it up! ...