EmeraldEyes

Hello. So the write up caught my eye and I thought I would review. ‘Fashion is about style.’ This is a fairly non-descript opening, but it establishes the topic of ...

Well this is the strangest thing I have seen on YWS. XD Umm... I don't think this really warrants a review, but I want to, because I have a few ...

I never understood what haikus were for. But you seem to have made great use for them here. I will analyse each one individually. So.. 1) '"how heavy this world ...

The title drew me to this. So.. 'The bleak dawn thawed at her.' Great style to this... the enjambment is fantastic and the style of your writing is very unique. ...

Hello. XD I like this work but I don't understand why you haven't used more punctuation, that would make the reading a lot easier because it flows into one HUGE ...

Hey! So YWS itself told meh I should review dis and I am noit one to argue so here we go. 'Everywhere I turn there is a gang Who never ...

u has a very romantic stylez of wrtin and i really liked it. i think you descrribe well, but you do go into a lot of deetz that im not ...

What the hell is this? XD Errr, not really sure I get what you're going on about there bebz. Sorry. I liked it though. Not sure why, but there waz ...

Like, I am well surprised by this innit?! You got this guy, right.... Robbie. And he's supposed to be like well fit I imagine. Uh-huh. I thinks hes a great ...

You have played wiv the language really well here. I love the way the poem looks on the paige. As for the subject matter, I enjoyed the idea of this ...

The topique of this work is very despressing innit? 'I listen to songs that cause pain.' Seems like this person is bullying themselves and it ain't helping them I am ...

So this work is really cold,as I can tell by the title. Also, I love the way oy have played around with the formatting of the work. It seems like ...

I love the elemtns And also the way you have incorporate them in to your story here. This is a very cool idea and thihk it will make for ane ...

It's cool that you are featured twice! I think this work is very dark in its way. Almost as if you are making a commmmmentary on the darker points in ...

I really love this piece. Espeically the fact that you haven't used cpital letters, because for some reason it puts your point across so much better I have no idea ...