EmeraldEyes

Hello! Love the title. But this work is too long. :/ It's a great start to a first chapter for a novel, but I think it just goes on a ...

I don't know how much of this is based on real life, but I like it because it seems true. However, you're definitely in need of using some more exciting ...

I am not sure if this is written for like, a children's story? Like, a sick version. Because the language used is simple enough to be, so I thought it ...

So I know this is unedited and Purple is commented on the same thing, but... I find the swearing to be really distracting when reading to this. Because you're effing ...

I love corny little tunes, and this certainly was one Xd Ain't nothing wrong with that girl. 'This is my home right here in your arms So don't let don't ...

I don't know what happened to the formatting on this piece, but the top is all scrunched up together. Writing about dreams is cool, but i foudn this work was ...

So this is as melodramatic as your username. XD 'How are you perfectly fine? How are you not broken? ' And that is not a bad thing at all - ...

[quote]I can’t seem to grasp. But if I wait, maybe I will. I think you have just popped the bubble surrounding writer's block and it makes total sense the way ...

You must hold a lot of stuff inside Hmm, I'm not sure why you wrote this, but I like it. Maybe it was part of catharsis? I hope it helped. ...

I have no idea who this guy is. But he sure sounds interesting. You've got a well structured piece of work here, with even pargraphs, good SPAG and interesting ideas. ...

True. But I have the tendency to think that the truth comes out when we're angry. Censorship goes out of the window and you say what you've been meaning to. ...

So I probably should have started with Chapter one, but I am going to judge this work on its individual merits. And is has many. First of all, it's veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy ...

There are so many works on here with trees in them. LOL Very atmospheric though. This is short and blunt. I like that. Because the language is long and flowing. ...

Bloody hell! Like whoa. Hmmm So I have been dipping in and out of this series and I have to say it's quite an interesting concept. To begin with, I ...

Hi Great title I don't quite understand what the trees have to do wit it??? 'Trees wither softly to odes of night, gagged by ivory gun-smoke blossoms' Calling upon nature ...