Sam Ibraham is a dedicated nurse practitioner with specialization in the field of primary healthcare. He has adequate knowledge and experience in the nursing industry. His areas of expertise include family practice, diagnosis and treatment, diabetes management, mental health management, chronic disease management, health promotion and disease prevention. He has been involved in several types of practices, leadership, administration, and innovative stakeholder discussion in the healthcare industry. He takes pride in providing high quality and solution focused outcomes to the industry. He keeps himself updated with the latest updates in the healthcare industry so as to provide state-of-the-art services. He provides comprehensive, accessible care and co-ordinated family healthcare services to the patients.
A health consultant, Sam Ibraham is dedicated to educating his patients about the need to follow a balanced and nutritious diet. He utilizes his excellent interpersonal and communication skills encourage them to eat right. He says that good nutrition becomes the vehicle to drive you to better outcomes, both physically and mentally. Nutrition is a metabolic process that must be understood, respected and can significantly help you progress to be a better you, adds Sam. He suggests that one should start their journey with nutrition by discovering whole foods that are found in their most natural form from the ground.
Sam Ibraham is a friendly and caring practitioner. He makes his patients comfortable so that they can freely discuss about the issues being faced by them. He is knowledgeable and has brought an amazing service to the region. He has won trust of his patients and most of his patients are from the references of existing ones.
When away from professional commitments, he enjoys reading, creative writing, and learning computer languages. He is a fitness enthusiast and enjoys trips to the gym and constantly learns about new innovations in healthcare. He enjoys running. He is an active member of the society and has a passion for charity work, mission work and not for profit sector.
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Is this fact or fiction? Cos it's impossible for me to decide.
I am not keen on works that aren't clear because they confused me.
'He enjoys running. He is an active member of the society and has a passion for charity work, mission work and not for profit sector.' I glanced up at the last line as I read this and it's really simply written, there is no glamour behind the words used here; and for some reason, that comes across as a little bit patronising.
Like, the work is impossible to understand.
You don't really explain who this person is. And I know there is a link, but you shouldn't just Facebook me up to something.
I want to read your work dude, not get linked to some random social networking page. That's not what I want.
None of this made sense to me.
You have the crux of good structure, but just... what was the point of this work?
I have no idea who this guy is.
But he sure sounds interesting.
You've got a well structured piece of work here, with even pargraphs, good SPAG and interesting ideas.
However, the language you use could be made a LOT more interesting for the reader.
Entice and excite them at the same time as informing them about your subject.
You need to work on diversity in your diction.
I suggest a bit of editing, will make this even better.