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Hello marms! Good job on the poem . I feel like this poem cuts as deep into your heart as the characters heart is being cut into. It was beautiful ...

I love how you both do and don't rhyme, because it gives the poem a nice rhythm to it. I enjoyed reading this poem because it was relatable and overall ...

There were some good lyrical points in this poem, and I loved reading it and I really enjoyed the rhymes. Now to nitpick. You use a lot of comas, but ...

Good job EmoBear. I loved the description and comparison of love and nature for they are very alike in many ways that you expressed in this poem. I also like ...

This poem is a little long, but very interesting. I love the descriptions you include though it did become very confusing at times. You shouldn't forget to capitalize the beginning ...

I liked this part of your fanfiction, and you should keep writing. The dialogue is a little dry, and you did miss a couple of comas, such as in the ...

Good job ElvenJedi. I liked the rhymes you fit in, and I love how light hearted and random this poem is. I don't completely understand why you included the lines ...

Hi MissGangamash! This poem is interesting and dark. I love the last two lines, as they give the poem a nice ending. I am a little lost when reading it, ...

Great work Catalyst, I liked the overall plot and the problem that the female character had to face, such as hunger, mistakes, and embarrassment. Your work was impressive and your ...

Hi Emmy! I really liked the emotional content and how you tried to beg in the poem - it made me feel like I was on a roller coaster ride. ...