ElvenJedi

Thanks for this helpful review! I'll consider your suggestions. Cool song btw =)

sure! wonderful piece of literature :)

Thanks so much for the encouragement :D

Thanks so much for this review, very VERY helpful! I just edited and I'm not sure if its any better... not finished editing though. I like your points, and have ...

Sure! Glad I could help and keep writing: )

Thanks so much for your encouragement! Really appreciate it :)

glad I could help! I really liked this poem, but now it is even better perfected! It is a very well-written work of literature! Well done!

I like your interpretations! I have my own meaning for it myself, but I left it up to the reader, so they can hear what the poem is telling them, ...

This was such a helpful review! Thanks for the encouragement and suggestions, and about those parts you pointed out, I felt kinda iffy about them myself when I wrote the ...

Great! And remember, don't change anything that gives it the style just because of some grammatical rule. Just make sure it stays true to it's style and meaning :)

Sure! And thx lol! Don't change or edit to much, and don't feel like you have to! Some of it is merely personal preference or just the style of the ...

Thanks for your review! Very helpful... I appreciate encouraging but also helpful reviews like this one!

Thx for this review! Very helpful! I think I'll edit it soon, I agree with your points :)

thanks for your encouragement! and the end was meant to be left up to interpretation. And yes, it does have a deeper meaning, thought even I know not what it ...

Thx for the encouragement! Really appreciate it ^_^