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Re: the creation
Hi Ley! Wow, I enjoyed this poem and the thoughts behind it a lot and it really made me think :) (apologies for any typos, as I am on mobile ...
Jan 31, 2025 -
Re: bury the dead.
Oh my gosh. This was one of those poems where a line hits you so hard, but then ANOTHER one does right after it, then ANOTHER ONE. unmarked tombstones lined ...
Jan 15, 2025 -
Re: no rest for the damned
Hi Ash!! Thought I would stop by for a review of this lovely poem of yours!! it's nighttime, everything's quiet. you are finally resting, a reprieve from the struggles of ...
Jan 14, 2025 -
Re: There Are Stars
hey pebble! Ellie here :) Cautioners by Jimmy Eat World Playing on the iPod hooked up to your radio Earrings messily lined up in rows Hanging from the side of ...
Jan 5, 2025 -
Re: mthrs
Oh my gosh, Ash, I love this!! First impression: I was looking at the title and like... hmmm this must be a typo. But then as I read the poem, ...
Jan 5, 2025 -
Re: young and helpless
Hey Lullaby
Jan 4, 2025 -
Re: What it means to not take your life for granted
This is a really interesting concept, and I enjoyed reading through this piece of yours. Basically, you are saying that, at the end of the day, our experiences and being ...
Jan 4, 2025 -
Re: Unhappy Emilia
Hey friend! This is a really interesting song. I noticed a common theme in a lot of your songs or poems is that you start by introducing us to the ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: Young love cannot be broken (or so it seems)
Hey friend! I am stopping by to review this lovely piece of yours. Let's jump right into it :D Elijah wanted to create marvelous, frightful things Grace saw a boy ...
Dec 28, 2024 -
Re: I Still Believe in You
Hello friend!! This was a very sweet poem. I like the light rhyme scheme that you have throughout the entire thing. I was really drawn in, and it feels very ...
Dec 13, 2024 -
Re: Poem Collection 1
Hello there (: Let me tell you about my city where the skies are red as blood and the stars are afraid to shine no one can enter no one ...
Dec 13, 2024 -
Re: You're My
Hi there! I love the idea of this poem. It is very sweet :) Frost formed around my lips, Then you planted that first kiss, Warm as the sun on ...
Dec 13, 2024 -
Re: stuck in problems I created
Hey there, friend! I enjoyed this poem a lot. I thought I would leave you a review, so let's jump right in. people love asking questions questions that they don't ...
Dec 13, 2024 -
Re: Oh Tainted Blood
Hey Sky! I wanted to stop by and leave a quick review for you because I found the message of your poem to be very interesting. I think that you ...
Dec 10, 2024 -
Re: Gold plated love
Hey there :) What a lovely poem!! Falling in love with you felt like the color gold The taste of warm honey The sun shining on my face so bright ...
Dec 10, 2024