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Re: for "you"
This poem was incredible to read, Yoshi! So grateful I discovered this treasure. Let's get right into the review!! i can feel it, you’ve laid this trap for me (because ...
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Re: Among the Trees
Hey friend!! Ellie back for another review on one of your fabulous poems :) Lets get right into my thoughts: Your gaze swift, eyes alight with wonder As they ever ...
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Re: Sixteen
Hey friend :) Well, haikus are short but sweet. :) Lets get into this review! I love the build first sentence you use: I've had quite a life. Right from ...
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Re: Deceit
Hello friend, wow, there are so many lovely haiku's on YWS! Even this older one from 2016, marvelous! I love them because they are simple to read, but packed with ...
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Re: The leaving of a Lover
Hey friend! I am currently on a quest, searching through the wonderful haiku's of YWS, and I stumbled upon this one :) It stood out to me and I wanted ...
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Re: The Haiku's Predicament
Hey there, friend! I have recently fallen in love with reviewing short poems and haikus, so upon finding this treasure hidden on YWS I knew I had to review :) ...
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Re: The World Around Us
What a sweet poem
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Re: A Short Poem for the Stars
This is a very sweet poem :D Lets get into a quick review: Magic starlight in the sky Glitters gracefully, and I I like how you broke up your lines ...
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Re: Muted Confessions
Wow, this was a lovely poem. Very short, but it captures a lot of relatable feelings. My heart races rapidly; Thinking about everything I've yet to say You know enough, ...
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Re: The Fields of My Childhood
Oh Ley, this is lovely. The more you grew, the more colors you were able to see and the most colors you found. Right from the start, I was blown ...
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Re: Man, wouldn’t it be so easy
Help friend :) Let's jump right into this amazing poem! Escape to a place where the sun’s golden dust Touches every surface for miles and miles Wow, right from the ...
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Re: YOU, all in capitals
Wow, this is so lovely to read and I am so glad you posted this :D Okay, I am very curious as to what the first stanza means, in your ...
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Re: It is you.
Here we are, for the sequel!! Let's get right into it!! Everybody thinks of me as a person who is always happy, A person who has no sorrows and a ...
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Re: Can it be you?
What a lovely poem! I found the sequel first, but decided to go back and review this one first!! Let's get right into it: I need someone in my life ...
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Re: Who am I?
I love this poem!!! The amount of questions that you used in this was fantastic. Personally, I am a big supporter of question poetry pieces like this and I am ...
Jul 8, 2024
