I agree with Nikayla when I write that there's not much this poem is really saying. While there's nothing wrong with that, it doesn't change the fact that this poem has a certain level of untapped potential.
When you say, "I hope it is good," there's so much more to that phrase than it might initially suggest. There are feelings of longing, anticipation, anxiety, and desperation in that phrase that are hidden from the reader.
Dig around and explore those feelings. Find out just what getting older means to you. You might find a new version of this poem, or maybe even another poem entirely.
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