EllieMae

Hi Starryy! What an interesting and unique poem! I enjoyed reading this. :) The first thing that stood out to me was your straightforward way of writing. You set the ...

Hey there! It is awesome that you are posting your first attempt at poetry on YWS! I really hope that you can get some good reviews and feedback :) I ...

Hey there! I enjoyed reading this and want to leave a review :) If I let the tears drop, then I would lose. They wouldn’t care. But she would. Only ...

Hey there, friend! I am here for day one of Team Tortoise for June :) Let's get into the review: My head hurts, it hurts to breathe I see evil ...

Hi there, friend! It has been a while since I reviewed one of your lovely works, so lets get into it! We starts off with Jason, he is in the ...

Hi there! This poem really stood out to me, right from the start, because you ask some really big questions! You start us off like this: Why do I have ...

Hi there, Rooke! I wanted to stop by and leave some thoughts on this lovely poem of yours. It caught my attention right away. It seems like the writer is ...

Hey there! This was a nice poem to read, because it has this feeling of reflective stillness. Despite talking about topics that seem very deep and meaningful to you, it ...

Hey there, I enjoyed your poem! I'd give anything for these moments to last long, but times fly by over the years as we say grace and our goodnight fears. ...

Hi! I totally agree with what TheTaostedWriter said, for being a 'mature' piece, I love how you used humor to talk about the topics in such a carefree and easy ...

Hi there, my friend! I always love seeing when you post poems so I was glad to come across this :D Okay, so the first thing that I noticed was ...

Hello there :D I enjoyed this! You start us off with this creepy feeling, with our pain character walking down a hallway at night... which is something that sounds pretty ...

Hello!! I really loved this piece :) To me, it seems like this is a reflection of a power struggle/competitiveness in the context of eating disorders, specifically in inpatient treatment. ...

Hi Roxanne! I was really intrigued by your poem right away because I find that shorter poems are often the most powerful :) To begin, I love how you start ...

Hi there! I enjoyed this short poem. I love it when writers take classic rhymes or tales because it's pretty easy to get the flow and predict how it will ...