Elizabeth

I'm sorry, but ... whoever you are, you didn't impress me with this poem... ... ... ... For God's sake, poetry isn't about rhyming, if that's what you think it's ...

What the hell is it with young people and all these depressing poems?! Jesus... First off, your first two lines have a problem... Everythings? ... Not a word. Apostrophes! ... ...

Aww. How sweet lol. I mean, I liked the words, and hey, Claudette can't say I can't relate. Farther away in Scotland is my fiancee, here I am in the ...

*Shivers Mentally* *Shivers Physically* Can't say anything else aside from the fact this is some "loofa" upped creepiness... I didn't mind the short simple wording though, it worked for this.... ...

Humph... I don't know. Not your best Brad, and I'm not only saying that. It's because I understood it, and that is why I didn't like it. Usually you have ...

I don't know why, it had good moments... I mean the words you chose, the 1 words you chose were good. Too much you, not enough us :P But seriously... ...

Imagery rocks. You can preview the thing before you post it, the yellow hurt my eyes and it's like 6 AM and I'm getting ready for school and the first ...

*Gaspis maximus* Well... it's 6:10 in the morning, I'm in my PJ s and what I have read has blown me away... ... Wow... .... there are tears coming to ...

*sniggers merciilessly* I wrote like this in fourth grade. Are they teaching Writers Workshop anymore in School? Wow... Well they were in MN... interesting but... wow... That they're, there, their ...

Oh my GOD... Short, elegant, humerous, beautiful. I ENVY YOUR TALENT! Tell me I'm beautiful, that was the best part... I mean, all the words... they were pretty... I liked ...

Trust me I've read most of your poems, they are not terrible or anything, and I hope I didn't say they were. there is just some things that I'd expect ...

What is wrong with peoples' vocabulary words? Go to or something, jeez *sighs* It's basically a compliment of Yoha and Pandora... only you need to make it waaay better than ...

This creeped me out... In a good way heh.... I think you used the word cross too many times in those two lines lol... start crossed, heart crossed, across a ...

There was something that I liked... it was that 2-2 then the other line format... I liked that... I liked the words in this but they were still a bit ...

... I disliked this I mean it I'm sorry I'm kinda sorry I don't like this like you do and I'm sorry I am being a burden by letting you ...