dramagurly--
I, I, I, me, me, me.
I get the distinct impression that you write for therapeutic reasons as both of your pieces "tell" us all about you, and the problems you are experiencing. At some point, you will realise that nobody really cares, and you have to decide that if you only write to make yourself feel better, then you are never going to attract an audience.
If you decide that you would like to reach an audience, you have to start writing for them.
Best,
Brad
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