Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
there were 3 young children and one day there mother died and the father not being able to care for the children married another woman who despised children. The woman took all the blankets away from the children at night so the children were freezing at night. one morning the stepmother woke up to the children awake and wrapped in a blanket she beat the children for disobeying her and locked the blankets in the chest. The same thing happened for the rest of the week so the stepmother stayed awake to find out how they were getting in the trunk. That night she stayed awake and at about 9.00 in the night a figure appeared walked over to the chest and took out the blankets wrapped them around the children and kissed them good-night. the figure turned around and the stepmother recognised the face of the children's birth-mother. the step mother left the house screaming and never returned.
Okay...well this is an intriguing. It seems that you have intended this to be something of a story outline judging by the comments down below, and reading through it, that is definitely the role that this is most suited to here. And on first impression, this doesn't seem like it would make for the longest story, but it does seem like it could make for an interesting read.
It seems to be a relatively common setup here with the stepmother treating these children rather harshly. It isn't the most original setup to work with, but then it is an interesting one and I think you could try and give this a more unique spin of your own, and I do believe that the end there when the birth mother returns is a good example because I haven't personally seen too much of that, especially in a situation where the step mother immediately flees without putting up a fight.
So...well as far as an outline goes, this one definitely has some potential if it is done well and you manage to put a sufficiently unique spin on it, although if things remain like every other story out there, it is still going to be intriguing, it just won't have a chance to be anything more than decent.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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