DD, he's provided me with evidence. Let's leave this out for now.
This topic will be locked until the matter is resolved.
Her lips
They burn
That old familiar taste;
Too bad
My words
Have all yet gone to waste.
My hands
Her sides
While lying waist to waist .
That look
She has
Has left , me still mesmerized!
Seeing her again is simply torture
Now I remember why I'd die for her.
What a complicated mess of a brain I own
In the morning she'll be gone, and I'll still be alone.
If all
You want
Is someone else to love;
I fear
That I
Will never be enough.
This can't
Make sense
My life is all a lie,
We try
We fail
And then we all die.
My life is going nowhere
Like anyone but me would really care.
What a complicated mind I own
Your always , and I'll always be alone.
DD, he's provided me with evidence. Let's leave this out for now.
This topic will be locked until the matter is resolved.
o.O
Say what now?
Brad, I have absolutely no reason to doubt you but plagarism is still a very serious accusation. With the utmost of respect, Incan -- are you positive about this?
~Dreamy
awsomewritter123--
It would be even better if you hadn't copied it from another website. I am sorry that perhaps previous reviews have driven you to this, but plagiarizing is simply unacceptable. As writers we have an ethical obligation to be honest--how could you possibly hope to get better by having us review someone else's work?
Best,
Brad
There was something that I liked... it was that 2-2 then the other line format... I liked that...
I liked the words in this but they were still a bit too simple, you could expand more...
There hould be some more commas and periods around the place, readers gotta breathe, otherwise I really liked this, this is one of the better's that I've seen fom you, though still some flaws it's still good.
Fix it up, bigger words, more punctuation, keep the 2-2 syllable stanzas though, I liked those 
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