Elizabeth

Holy hail... this was .... good (O_O) Too many question marks but... gosh.... You just made it up? Or are you really mad at your parents? "They weep fake tears ...

I wish it were the way it was I think Were should be was... but then again... I am not sure, it sounds weird like that... maybe because there is ...

This.... this is like.... Not like.... something I'd want to sing. It is out of beat... and I thought it was teacher anyway... joy to the world santa clause is ...

Hmm... Father's a little bit of a thwack isn't he? We'll take care of that *kills father*. Anyway, you should tell why her parent's are split up or something... Why ...

“So my friends and I were wondering,” you say, gesturing over to the table where you eat with your legion of followers. “Are you a lesbian?” A girl I knew ...

This was a very pretty poem, a bit short for my taste though... I liked the first line, but the second one sounded out of place... I don't know how ...

interesting... gets more comments than anythig I get, which apparently means that it isn't crap. Never say it's crap... this was incredibly .... interesting... there is really nothing more I ...

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG So much unnessisary repitition... I liked the idea of it all but it was played out so short and.... rhymy... forced "rhymy". I liked

Beautifully written. Beautifully done.... If you do chance to leave Chevy won't have many things to post on anymore. For that I pity. "oil-slicked puddles of November, half hung drainpipes ...

.... Augh... Where to begin? I'm sorry but this was totally odd and... not fitting and... not... writefully right! The first 2 lines seemed too long for each anotehr as ...

Wow I really liked this. It was very sad though, you have to admit, but it was so beautiful.. something that sort of stood out to me was in the ...

Bah, everbody can write better poems than I can! Bah! I am a curse, bah! I can easily relate to this, I love poems where I can relate to them.. ...

Ooh, a new perspective of birds... I remember when my friend said she saw a seagull outside the window in Art class... But it was snowing. I told her it ...

oh, this is based on real life, everyone in the play is actually real people we know. .................................................... :shock: Please tell me this is innuendo and not some...sick p

Aww. I'm sorry that she/he treated you badly. (Honestly I don't know if they were a male or female, their gender setting was FEMALE but one time they mentioned their ...