Elizabeth

*Holds Psy back* EASY NOW BUDDY COME ON! It sounded... really... Um.... Well repetitive... and it had this OLDE English style... but it wasn't like... right OLDE English... so it ...

1st of all this poem isn't about me 2nd of all i wrote this poem when i was about 11 and 3rd of all i know i have to change ...

Please don’t go! I need you so much! Please come back to me My sweet baby, I need your love. Could probably be: Please don't go! Please come back to ...

For a 9/12 year old, pretty decent job. Of course as a 9/12 year old I knew nothing about repitition, so if he's planning to fix it, he can fix ...

why do you post poetry if you know that all your going to get is praise? :D it's not fair. i'd pout, but i'd have nothing to complain about, really. ...

:cry: Oh my God Vernon :( :cry: Aww.... Vernon :) This was so sweet.... Yet mellowingly depressing... *sighs* Now I'm too busy thinking to correct errors *cries* I love you

... Isn't this you already? heh.... You are already the worst type of Famous. And soon will be named after the worst Cancer. "Jesus would return to ask me for ...

This was sweet... "You’re the encyclopedia of worthless information," I didn't really get teh tone, from what I got it was an annoyed one. Worthless? Or just wise? Because that ...

Give me a human arrow to shoot an angel, .....a human bomb to kill a world, ..........a human spear to kill a god. Give me a human hand to save ...

I haven't ever seen a poem with the word WONT in it... I forgot what It means... in the conterxt, appearing to mean, persuaded and convinced... something like that.... I ...

Recharge your batteries. That line... makes me wonder, what TYPE of love are we talking about? LOL I dont' know... lol... the word IMAGINE by itself... threw me off a ...

Had a nice... tune to it... my head was reading it as some sort of song, worked out pretty nicely... This sounds like me though... It was pretty... very pretty... ...

march across the paper in no particualr order Usually when people write, they usually KNOW what order the words go to... I mean, when was the last time you read ...

Every other stanza rhymed... it annoyed me somehow... This was deep though, I admit, I liked it... I don't know why but I'm suddenly annoyed. Good job though :)

Heh, I liked this. Magical. Hole-y. Cute :) This sounded oddly romantic... I liekd it though. I like weird things. I like odd things. I like hole-y things. I would ...