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I agree with whoever said that this could have been prose. It's a fairly decent poem, but it's twelve stanzas long and we don't get that much insight into the ...

Hi there! In addition to what Suzanne said-I agree with it 100%-I just have a a few comments. You've got a start to this poem, and I can see that ...

Hi CreativeFreak! This was a very good poem! It was well put together, and I liked the premise. It's something that seems to be discussed in our everyday world. However, ...

Hey there. I agree with Ben-it seemed a little too expected. Although it's a nice, true piece, it's got nothing we haven't heard before. I thought the fact that it ...

Hi Romeyo. This poem wasn't very good. The message you're trying to get across is sweet, but my main problem lied in these lines: U DO... BE GRATEFUL! First off, ...

Hiya! This going to be hard to critique, lol, because there was so little wrong that I saw it. It's a nice, persuasive essay that I agree with 100%. I ...

Hi there! This was a cute poem-I liked it. Your simple imagery and word choice create the perfect mood for this poem. However, for all the strong points that it ...

Hello there, and welcome to YWS! This piece needs some work. Just because this is a poem does not mean that it does need punctuation. Also, your subject matter seemed ...

Hi there! This was a nice poem, but there were definetly a few things. It seems as you rushed through this poem and gave it little thought, because there are ...

I agree with silented1. You should review more. Looking at your profile, I see you have two literary comments, but they weren't 250 characters or more. You can check the ...

Hello there Sam! Welcome to YWS! I see that you aren't a new member, but you've only recently decided to post. In any case, welcome back! A nice poem. You ...

Hi there McMorning! Welcome to YWS and the wonderful world of poetry. Overall, it wasn't bad. You've got nice word choice and imagery, but the subject matter of the poem ...

Hi Conrad! I really liked this poem. It was short and sweet; you had fantastic word choice and imagery. I've only read a few poems of yours before, and they're ...

Hi Ofir! A beautiful piece of poetry. I absolutely detest Alice in Wonderland more then you can imagine, but this was just a well-written, solid poem. You capture all elements ...

Hi there. This is not poetry. I don't mean to sound harsh, but this poem is simply a work of prose divided into stanzas with a lack of punctuation. The ...