Elinor

Hello there! Welcome to YWS. I'm quite fond of Halloween! I love dressing up, eating pumpkin seeds, going to haunted houses, watching scary movies and reading scary stories. It's quite ...

Tenyo! I don't think I've ever read any of your work before, and I have to say that you write beautifully. I love the vivid imagery and wonder that this ...

Hi Jonathan! I'm not really sure what this poem is supposed to be out. It's definitely cute, and I think you have a workable premise here. And while I like ...

Hi, I love the Godfather. It's one of my favorite movies. I have yet to read it the book, though! I bet it's wonderful. What I love most about your ...

Hi! So, in a lot of ways, this chapter is better than the first. I think the short scene at the pool is well-executed and suspenseful. However, there is still ...

Hi, So, I first read the second part of this story, but I thought it would be a good idea to come back and review the first for context. These ...

Hi Judy! I'm Ellie, and I'm going to review this story for you. You're lucky to have Hannah as your teacher! She's really a wonderful person. You're a really good ...

Hi, I'm not sure what to think of this. It feels very incomplete- is this only the first part of a larger story? I surely hope so, but you should ...

Hi meg! I really like the image that this poem evokes. I've always been fascinated with the idea of masquerade balls and the romanticism of it all. And while this ...

Hi Spots! This first chapter was really good, and I hope you decide to post more. If you've ever seen the movie "Into the Wild", your main character sort of ...

Hi again Lo! Thought I'd check out this chapter since I saw that it was up. You're definitely a talented writer, like Iggy said, not much really happens. I'm itching ...

Hi, This is okay. I'm curious to see where you go with it, and you're a good writer. My name's Ellie, and it's always fun to see stories that have ...

Hi there, This piece is quite good, and I think everyone needs to hear the message and some point or another in their lives. I live around so much negativity ...

Hi there! I totally love this poem. It reminded me of a cross-country road trip I took a few years ago. We were about halfway through the two-day drive, and ...

Hi, This poem is pretty good, and as a whole I don't have much to say about it. While the topic that you're writing about may not be the most ...