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Re: Fight For Sunlight
Hi there! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. So I thought that this was a really interesting idea for a poem, and I definitely think that ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Bullshit I have since unpublished part 2
Hi, I'm Elinor! I just wanted to say that I'm really sorry that this happened to your brother, and I'm glad that he's doing better. Did the therapist know about ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: An Arrival Later Unwelcomed
Hi Lightsong! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a quick review. I think that this is a really interesting poem, and that it has the potential to be ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The House on Laurel Hill
Hi Hippy! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. :) Thanks for posting! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I'm interested in this piece, ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: Hell
Hi Kathryn! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I thought the premise behind this poem was really interesting, but in the end, it didn't really do ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Heart of a Ship
Hi Kenzie, Welcome to YWS! I hope you've been having a good time around here so far. This is a really interesting metaphor and I think a solid foundation for ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Odd
Hello, Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I really liked this, and thought that it had a powerful message that a lot of ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Alone
Hi, Kudos to you for writing all of this down and for being able to articulate what I imagine must have been a difficult experience for you. Just a note, ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: A Hundred Reasons
Hi there, Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I just want to say that this was really beautiful. You're a very talented writer ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: You are something I can not touch!
Hi there, This was interesting. Congratulations on writing it - poetry has always been really difficult to me and I was invested while reading this. It's centered around a good ...
Sep 11, 2015 -
Re: Statistics
Hi there, So I thought it was really interesting - I like it. It's a very intriguing story, and one that made me think and is about a very interesting ...
Sep 11, 2015 -
Re: Meet in the Middle
Hello! Haha, I love this and like fortis I know a lot of people that could benefit from the message of this. As far as your note about keeping it ...
Sep 10, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
Hi, Is this based on any existing fairytale or did you come up with all yourself? I'm impressed because it had a very "classic" feel, from the way the story ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: Dreams
Hello Artemis! (Love the username!) I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. :) Congratulations on writing this - poetry is really hard. I've always struggled with it ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: A Land By Myself
Hello, Thanks for posting this! I really admire anyone who writes poetry. It's always been difficult for me personally, but when it's good, it's really good, and reading it always ...
Sep 7, 2015
