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Elinor

Elinor

  • Poetry » Science, General Re: Fight For Sunlight

    Hi there! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. So I thought that this was a really interesting idea for a poem, and I definitely think that ...

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Other » Spiritual, Satire Re: Bullshit I have since unpublished part 2

    Hi, I'm Elinor! I just wanted to say that I'm really sorry that this happened to your brother, and I'm glad that he's doing better. Did the therapist know about ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Arrival Later Unwelcomed

    Hi Lightsong! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a quick review. I think that this is a really interesting poem, and that it has the potential to be ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The House on Laurel Hill

    Hi Hippy! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. :) Thanks for posting! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I'm interested in this piece, ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Hell

    Hi Kathryn! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I thought the premise behind this poem was really interesting, but in the end, it didn't really do ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Heart of a Ship

    Hi Kenzie, Welcome to YWS! I hope you've been having a good time around here so far. This is a really interesting metaphor and I think a solid foundation for ...

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Art » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Odd

    Hello, Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I really liked this, and thought that it had a powerful message that a lot of ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alone

    Hi, Kudos to you for writing all of this down and for being able to articulate what I imagine must have been a difficult experience for you. Just a note, ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Hundred Reasons

    Hi there, Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I just want to say that this was really beautiful. You're a very talented writer ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: You are something I can not touch!

    Hi there, This was interesting. Congratulations on writing it - poetry has always been really difficult to me and I was invested while reading this. It's centered around a good ...

    Sep 11, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: Statistics

    Hi there, So I thought it was really interesting - I like it. It's a very intriguing story, and one that made me think and is about a very interesting ...

    Sep 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Meet in the Middle

    Hello! Haha, I love this and like fortis I know a lot of people that could benefit from the message of this. As far as your note about keeping it ...

    Sep 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Untitled

    Hi, Is this based on any existing fairytale or did you come up with all yourself? I'm impressed because it had a very "classic" feel, from the way the story ...

    Sep 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dreams

    Hello Artemis! (Love the username!) I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. :) Congratulations on writing this - poetry is really hard. I've always struggled with it ...

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Land By Myself

    Hello, Thanks for posting this! I really admire anyone who writes poetry. It's always been difficult for me personally, but when it's good, it's really good, and reading it always ...

    Sep 7, 2015


I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am.
— Sylvia Plath