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Hey Sare, how you doing? ^o^ I'm Ellie. The girl sat at the kitchen table, head in her hands. Okay, I think your hook does need a little bit of ...

Vivid scene of an angels’ light. This is a vivid scene of an angels light : Graves that open up at midnight. The devil’s smile hidden in a picture. For ...

Hey UserName! What's up? I'm here to review your piece :-) I struggle to find the right words. The right words to describe or to explain what? In a foggy, ...

heres something i just threw together last night. its supposed to be three poems in one. the whole thing, the right side, and the left side. it can be read ...

Okay, this is really short, but I'll try to do what I can. If you don't know me, I'm Ellie. I'll review the lovely poem I'm sure you've written. So ...

Tick. Tock. Tick Tock. Tick Tock. Your adolescent heart punches at the anticipation of those last few moments. Last few moments of what? Your heartbeat falling in with the rhythm ...

I don’t remember how I died, or anything that happened before. ... I'm a little unsure about this opening sentence. On one hand, It makes me want to find out ...

Okay. This is my first attempt at reviewing poetry, so beary with me. I am a hardened lump of play-do- The Dash after 'do' can be removed. And If you ...

Hey Shina! How's It Going! Gonna Do A Review! Preface The bright light of day began to fade and time appeared to become quick. Hmm. Your phrasing is kind of ...

Hello. I'm Ellie. I'll be your reviewer for today! :D I. Title I don't really like the title. I think it is a little childish and un-exhilarating. Maybe you could ...

The world around the building was engulfed in flame. Seems a little purple proseish / confusing. Try : Fire raged through the city, but, for some reason, the building was ...

Hi, I'm Ellie, and I'll Be You're Reviewer For Today :-) People say when your about to die, your life flashes before your eyes. What? They do? How would anyone ...

Hi, I'm Ellie, and I will be your reviewer for today :-) Ganan's joints bludgeoned him with a dull, aching sensation as he slipped out of the tub of hot, ...

Hi, I'm Ellie, and I'll be your reviewer for today :D He only went inside the café because it was the first place he’d spotted where smoking was allowed. Bad ...

The night was dark, darker than normal. What makes this night so special? A young girl in a dirty, worn out dress dragged her feet across the fields, heading towards ...