Elijah

Hello there! Eli here! First be first, welcome to YWS, I hope you are already welcomed warmly. If not, you have one welcoming from me now! I hope that you ...

Hey there! Eli here! Great morning/afternoon/eve! I am here to review of lovely piece. Not very good with poetry to be honest. It is not the best I could review ...

Hello there!Eli here! Pretty much my first review from such a long break and I can tell I will need more time until school finishes and all so I get ...

Hello! Eli here~ You start very promising, showing us there is one male narrative to begin with. But you continue to name that person /he/ and this is why you ...

Hello there! Eli here~ Well, that was pretty fast and tensed up to be honest. I do not mind it though. Somehow it all makes sense the way it is. ...

Hello there! Eli here~ I have come upon your writing to review it. Though I see you have one or two reviews already on point. One more will not do ...

Congrats for your first work written here and welcome here as I assume you can be called a new member. I hope your expirience in the site is pleasant and ...

This part is a bit longer so we will have what to talk about? Anyways, I will try my best to be short and clear as much as possible. I ...

Hello there! I am getting back to reviewing wonderful stories who are a bit longer just like my liking, I do not like amazing things to end fast. I hope ...

I can see it is a prologue and only as the beginning, I do not need to know everything so yet. It may be your first work, may not, it ...

I can not tell I have heard about this movie before, which makes a review upon it pretty hard, but your way of expressing the surroundings of the narratives is ...

King here The fifth part is published already! Anyways, I find less and less issues with each next chapter! The useless commas though continue coming and maybe this is the ...

King here Why am I so into sad poetries recently? They just make me shiver and my heart throb. Anyways, this is one of the emotional ones. I do not ...

King here Hello there! Here we have a sad poetry for being unwanted or unappreciated by someone you really care for. I noticed the slight rhyme that have been put ...

King here It felt like I am at the edge of a cliff and ready to fall, I was so excited for the outcome of this situation. This part was ...