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Re: Slowly Dying
and none stop yelling, Maybe this will be my only complain connected with this work. I think it needs to be non-stop, not none stop. The part in which you ...
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Re: Space Prince Story Chapter 2
King Here I do not know what to say about this 'aer' thing but I will let it pass beause I can not say I know how it will be ...
Apr 30, 2016 - Re: I find love in front of a bakery shop. Apr 30, 2016
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Re: Run
King Here Oh, okay, I really did not expect this at the end. I thought this is pretty sad and painful but in the end you caught me unprepared. I ...
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Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 10
King Here I did not even notice that you had released the tenth part already. I am really out of track recently. Anyways, I really felt curious because of the ...
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Re: I Trusted You (Dialogue prompt short)
King Here Hello there. I see you are someone new to this site. So, welcome to YWS and I hope you have fun. I feel pretty gladful to be one ...
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Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel :9
King Here Well, these two peeps make me curious and angry at the same time. Seriously, I smell trouble from miles away. I wished you could let her lover stay ...
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Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel : 8
Steward, do not dare to touch my dear main character! Looks like I got curious here. Read the next chapter thingy in the end made me curious even more. Good ...
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Re: The South African Roller Coaster
Hello there. I think you had written a very good and interesting piece. I do not really have many complains but one of them is that you 'I' too much ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Chicago Chapter 6
Okay, they are finished. The last part is surely with 100 warnings xD Anyways, I am here as I understood that you had released this part already. How do you ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Are they looking?
Hello there! I would to review this work. I think that I am always having the same thoughts and I thought I am the only one being so weird and ...
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Re: A Pen
Hello there! I see you are new to this site and I am glad to see so many new members this week. Welcome to YWS. I hope I am helpful ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: Leaving a Spark
Oh , gosh, okay, I admit I cried! This is really beautiful. This is heart warnming and I know there are many people whi think they die and leave nithing ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: The Sad Little Flower
Hello there! Here to review and try to help you with this lovely work of yours. This is pretty innocent and sweet work. So sad it is because the flower ...
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Re: Looking Glass
I feel like this is something we can all in this site relate to because we are all around the teen ages in which we think of many things. Negatives ...
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