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Re: Chicago Chapter 9
King Here Hello there, friend! Forgot to check if the next part is released and as I see, it is already here without me knowing about it. Anyways, I am ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: Dear Mr Maple tree
King Here Hello there, sunshine Rashi and as requested from you, I am here to shit on your work. As a very good buddy would do. Send hugs later. May ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: The Best Part Of Me
King Here Hello there! First of all, the main idea of this writing was kind of odd and unattractive at least for me because of the strange basic thing we ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: The Bittersweet Day
King Here Hello there. I understand your poem very maybe 50-67% because of the mystery in it and all the 'them' and 'you'. For such a work, being certain about ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: Lovely
I actually can not say anything negative because I do not find anything wrong to say about this work of yours. Sorry that this review will be kind of useless ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: the last things I need to say
King Here Hello there! I think this lovely work deserves my 300th review! So, here I am, wishing to help you with it. The grammar was really a problem in ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 23
King Here Hello there! I did not notice that you had already released this part. A very interesting and amazing part. I hope you keep on writing with such passion ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: Missing What You've Never Had
King Here This is really sad but still beautiful work. I have no complains, maybe only that you could describe more the person and why you feel this feelings towards ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: The Dying Sun [NOVEL]
King Here Hello there! This work caught my eye with its unique and interesting tittle. The style in which you had written this work is really cathy. I did not ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: A true gentleman becomes a thief!
King Here Hello there. Here to review your work. I see this is your first, right? You have a very good vocabulary use and grammar which is pretty good to ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: Chicago Chapter 8
King Here Hello there! Here to check and review your lovely work as requested. I like that this charapter is again in Tiffany's POV showing us her daily like. Personally, ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: i fall on my knees
King Here Hello, hello. Here to check your wonderful work. I already saw that many had reviewed this and pointed out their own opinion and that there are mistakes some ...
May 7, 2016 -
Re: A Bard's Tale
King Here Hello there. I really interesting short story about a mysterious man who they are singing about. I like the description around the man and the simple ways he ...
May 7, 2016 -
Re: Inside/Outside
King Here Hello there. I really love this work because it shows that in society we have one standard for women and we give them no change to be anything ...
May 7, 2016 -
Re: You
King Here Hello there! I adore this work. I like that it is short but still full of so many emotions. There was a sudden twist which was not the ...
May 6, 2016