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Hey Mayfyre (love the name by the way)- welcome to the young writers society! I really do hope you stick around. I'm with kyte. This really is a good begining. ...

Second time lucky! Apologises, I wrote a review for this poem late last night and then my computer shut down before I could post it. Grr. Anyways, less of that. ...

Hey Bittersweet, and welcome to YWS! Just a few things here while I've still got them in my head. 1. Capitalization- you don't need a capital letter to start each ...

Hey blacktiger. This was an enjoyable and perceptive piece to read. You've really channeled some of the thoughts and emotions of a bride to be into this. However I didn't ...

Hey 1dering, nice job on this piece. Very lyrical, thoughtful and poetic. I really got a feeling when I was reading it that the speaker goes through these emotions everyday. ...

Heya, haven't seen you around before. Welcome to YWS. Don't get me wrong, this is great- but I felt like it should be in the Narrative Poetry section? It just ...

Hey Mad. Great job on this poem. It seems really well thought out and the imagery is superb. I especially liked the first stansa. It draws the reader in very ...

Scott, Mr. Popular, thats who you are Adored and Admired by people wide and far with a charm thats addictive and looks that can kill your face should be the ...

I'm with BBB. I got a flutter when I read the last line. Just a few things I noticed just while I was reading...the rhyming throughout is forced and gives ...

Hmm, I liked this though. I could be just me, but there's a strange so of rhythm to it. There was a dark, smouldering sort of presence of tension building ...

Hey, and welcome to YWS! Just remember to take a look at the rules and guidelines- and that there is a ratio of 2:1= 2 reviews to every poem you ...

Ahh, Bravo Jasmine! Really, I adored it! I have a cherry blossom in my back garden! It's not in bloom though anymore, *sniff. I wrote about it in one of ...

Hey Alexis. Welcome to YWS. I hope to see you stick around. Aswell as being a great place to share our poetry, it's all a great place to learn how ...

This was great. I loved the unexpected theme of Jesus. The poem was unique and simple, and didn't shove the message down the reader's throat. I especially love the reference ...

I liked this. This overall concept brought a new spin on performers and their fans. However I felt that there were a few things that brought it down. 1. Structure- ...