EdgarAllanPoe

I liked this piece. Deadly, cool, mysterious. Just the way that catches my attention. I like this poem a lot. I like how the wife is so depressed and ... ...

Hey buddy! This poem was so sweet. I like how you portrayed yourself as the butterfly. That is clever. It's like a children's story. I admit, the end stanza I ...

Personally, I liked your story. I didn't know you had a romantic side to you! That was great. The only part I didn't like was that she kissed him so ...

I liked your poem. It makes people relate to it. Grammar and punctuation aren't problems nessasary to correct for me. It just shows that they were maybe thinking off the ...

Hey! I like it. I loooooveed the description of the hair and skin. Man, I wish you used more of a description though! That would be so awesome!!! Keep it ...

Your number one problem here is the complete lack of rhythm or flow. Your lines are choppy and varying in size for no real reason, and it's difficult to read ...

I thought it was cool. It is kind of like "The Bells" by Edgar Allan Poe. :) Even though I didn't understand for you the reasons why you were crying ...

Your song sounded like a poem to tell you the truth. Well, songs are poetry, but when I think of a song, I see someone singing it. I don't see ...

Hey, Jabber! Nice poem! It felt like I was reading Robert Frost! I liked how you were writing a poem about how you didn't know what to write about. You ...

Hey! I liked the story and I think Poe would too. :) I liked how you didn't really put anybody else in the story, just the man and the wife. ...

I like the setting you put, describing you in battle. I just don't think perish went with it. I mean perish means expire and dead, but you could have used ...

I liked your poem. I liked how you used the cloud to express your feelings(if that's what you were trying to do)! Genius. I liked it, & I liked the ...

This is a great poem. i think it would be great though if you kept the part where you said that you noticed him eating your soul to sum it ...

I really loved this poem! Honestly, it had no hidden message or anything behind it, but I still thought the poem itself was written beautifully. You did a good job ...

Hey, I'm Chardinay. It was good! I've never seen a poem full of quotes. :D A poem doesn't have to be made up of rhymes. I personally LOVE poems that ...