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Wow, it is really an inspirational poem. I was in such a bad mood since I am sick today and reading your poem made me feel better. This poem is ...

Its really a short one. If you want it short then you can at least give 14 lines and that would make it a sonnet. And also sorting it into ...

A very nice poem I should say. And one can tell that you have put your heart into it. I liked the last stanza and it is my favorite. Everything ...

Wow, I absolutely love this poem. I like so many things about this poem that it is hard to describe...I will try anyway. This poem looks as if it is ...

Very good and a meaningful poem I should say. This is a very complicated poem for me since I am younger but I will try. To me a few things ...

A very nice poem I should say. It was well written and one can say that you have really put a lot of work into it. There are no faults ...

Hi. I am here to review your work. This is a very good poem. I like it. Well now let us begin from the beginning. Firstly, the poem looks ill-sorted. ...

Hmm.. It is certainly a good poem. I like it and being new you have done very well. Good work. Now let me see what I can tell you about ...

It is an impressive sonnet! I like it very much...You did an absolutely good job. However even though it is a sonnet, it requires a bit of grooming. Firstly you ...

Wow a very beautiful poem. Very nice and thoughtful of a poem i should say. It has no mistakes but you can improve it a bit by distributing the lines ...

Its a very nice poem and I liked it. There are no mistakes in the poem however you might want to groom up your poem a bit. Like sorting it ...

This is a rather very true poem!! Well, anyway it was a good one and whatever you said it is all very true. However you might want to change the ...

Well, it is a very simple and sort of a deep poem I should say. You actually did a very good work!! You maintained a very good 6-5-6 pattern. This ...

Hmm, this poem is a bit of a complicated one. Maybe because of the relationship between you and your father. Well, anyway the pattern of this poem, even though the ...

This poem is rather more better than how you claimed it was. Any way, this poem had a great potential to become a sonnet! It still has it. However, to ...