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This is a very good. I think that this poem does not need any scenes as many of the poems require. This poem is about a geisha like how she ...

Hmm, this poem is a bit of a complicated one. Maybe because of the relationship between you and your father. Well, anyway the pattern of this poem, even though the ...

Hey FleetingEternity, I am here to review your work. As I was reading your poem, I could not help but look over to your profile pic. It is Gaara from ...

A superb and a beautiful poem. It has a very good rhythm and even though the lines do not rhyme, it is good. Your poem would have looked better if ...

Your poem is very good and I should say you really did some hard work on it. Your poem has a smooth flow and it is all even. But however, ...

This is truly a dream of an insomniac indeed. I re.ally liked your poem and would someday like to have a dream like that. I loved your poem but it ...

Wow, that was a good load of nice poems you have in there. I liked the last stanza of the first poem. It was short, very descriptive and a really ...

Its a super cute poem!! and I love it!! At first let me tell you that even though it is a very good one, a bit of grooming would have ...

Hmm, its actually a very nice poem. Plain yet complicated. So, this poem is really a nice one. But it sounds king of some paragraph or something as it does ...

I was really touched by your poem. It was very descriptive and I could get a picture of the subject like what happened and how nice he was, etc. But ...

I absolutely loved your poem and as somehow mesmerized by it. It sounds so adventurous and yet it has a hint of the hardships that they faced. It was a ...

That sure goes to the nose. Its a good poem. You could have made it better by working on the punctuation. I bet you are a nature lover. Because you ...

You are right and I agree with you. Actually there is no heaven and hell. It is what we make out of our life or how we live it. And ...

Heh! you certainly just hellishly and devilishly hate that person don't you? Well, it is a very short sweet and a mocking sort of a poem that has some feelings ...

That is a very cute and touching poem you have in there. The subject of the poem is your pet dog I presume. Usually people write very brief and general ...