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Wow, that was a good load of nice poems you have in there. I liked the last stanza of the first poem. It was short, very descriptive and a really touching piece. Now, on to the second. I really liked your method of writing dead and dying, dead or dying after every first line. This sort of gives the poem a bit of rhythm and it was certainly a very precise and simple poem and it is a good thing. About the third. Well, it seemed to be a bit of a graphic poem to me mainly when I am reading and picturing you deleting some poem and getting all frustrated. lol. Well, it was a sort of a bulky kind of poem. No offense but even though there were only three stanzas, there were many lines in each. Maybe you could have written the stanzas in pairs like 2-4-2-4 method or something. Its actually good that you have managed to maintain the 6-6-6 method but I think 6 is a bit too much. Till 5 it is okay. But, anyway I liked all of your poems and keep writing.
Wow, that was a good load of nice poems you have in there. I liked the last stanza of the first poem. It was short, very descriptive and a really touching piece. Now, on to the second. I really liked your method of writing dead and dying, dead or dying after every first line. This sort of gives the poem a bit of rhythm and it was certainly a very precise and simple poem and it is a good thing. About the third. Well, it seemed to be a bit of a graphic poem to me mainly when I am reading and picturing you deleting some poem and getting all frustrated. lol. Well, it was a sort of a bulky kind of poem. No offense but even though there were only three stanzas, there were many lines in each. Maybe you could have written the stanzas in pairs like 2-4-2-4 method or something. Its actually good that you have managed to maintain the 6-6-6 method but I think 6 is a bit too much. Till 5 it is okay. But, anyway I liked all of your poems and keep writing.