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Hi EPICnumber1 here for a review... I like this poem alot but I don't think it flowed as well as it could I'll try and help you but just keep ...

Hi Noelle, EPICnumber1 here for a review... Wow this fantastic I really can't find anything that needs improving but if you want a challenge then try to write more stanzas ...

EPICnumber1 here for a review... Hi I love reviewing poems because apparently I am better at reviewing them than anything else, so I am told. I think this poem is ...

EPICnumber1 here for a review... Hello, I love this poem because it is quite emotional and I love the repetition: you are not alone. Brilliant. When you say, sticks and ...

EPICnumber1 here for a review... This chapter is quite long and if chapters are long reviewers try to avoid that. Ok I love the first paragraph although it's not really ...

EPICnumber1 here for a review... Happy review day! Only think about the segestions you think are worth adding in to your story don't bother with the ones that are wrong ...

EPICnumber1 her for a review... Ok I laughed at the end I don't know if it was suppoed to be funny though I don't think it is but I laughed ...

Hello wisegirl22 you requested a review so I will do my best. I want to apologise in advance as I might spell some stuff wrong because spelling is not my ...

EPICnumber1 here for a review... Before I say anything let me welcome you to YWS if you need anything just drop me a PM. I hope you enjoy it here. ...

Hello EPICnumber1 here for a review... This is a great poem, the best I've read in weeks. I love the topic fandoms because there is loads to write about. When ...

Hi EPICnumber1 here for a review... Wow I really liked this I haven't reviewed for a while so I will try my best :) I will jump straight into what ...

Hello EPICnumber1 here for a review... Wow this is good, I like writing poems as well but I could never write something like this. I think I know what happened ...

Hello EPICnumber1 here I thought you hadn't been on for a while because I am fairly new here, joined last month and I have never seen you here before :) ...

Hi I really liked this I couldn't look away from my computer. I agree with alevine you wern't afraid to curse. :). I think there is too much diolugue but ...

Hi Alpha Right you wanted to know about the Pace, style and stucture ok I will do my do my best :) Pace-It was slow moving but you never told ...