Duncan

Hello! This story has to be your hard work for countless hours, right? I like it very much. I like the detailed way you portrayed Stethno. Thw way you used ...

I think this is a quite a good story. Your plot is quite interesting, so I am certainly be willing to read more from you. You have a good way ...

I like this short story because its feelings and emotions are so strong you can see them flooding out of every single word. Also, as Harshita had said, the grammar ...

This is a good piece of lyrics, which probably summed up my experience in YWS. The content is successfully written to raise feelings among us- YWS readers. As RagingLive had ...

This is a good story, especially the building of tension from the beginning. You have managed to use dialogues very fluently to move your story forward. Vivian had helped you ...

I think this is a good short piece of narrative. Since EscaSkye had already commented on your use of grammar, I think I will comment on your plot, tone and ...

I think the opening was really interesting. It motivated me to continue reading. I think you had captured the mental movements of Hank really well. I could sense his mistrust ...

I liked this work very much. Your imagination about afterlife is wonderful. I like how you portrayed the gods, and the boy, and actually every characters you have introduced in ...

I think your plot is quite good. However I have to point out a few grammatical mistakes first. 1. Dialogues I suggest putting dialogues as separate paragraphs (I don't know ...

I am a peace lover, and I definitely agree to the last stanza. 'All blades are meant for war whether or not we wish them to be.' This really made ...

I think this work is quite good. It totally describes how teenagers spend their nights during holiday. The topic was definitely going to make a big boom around teens. I ...

I like this part very much: 'From the moment I saw Emily, I knew I was a goner. My insides went all warm and fuzzy and she became a permanent ...

The fighting scene was very well written indeed. I could see the actions in front of my eyes- that realistic! The second part of the story was also quite satisfying. ...

This is hilarious! I like the plot twist at the end very much: "introduce yourself to your class". I think this will be a wonderful piece of work when it ...