Verse 1
I know I like writing
and I know many people do
and there's only one site
to encourage you.
It's called Young Writers Society
with amazing users and things
I think this site has the best
writing you can bring.
Chorus
The spotlights, review days, users, and names
the forums, the chapters, and writing all the same.
The best site can be seen
it's no difficult thing
that this web
is the best.
Verse 2
I know someday that when
I'll think about this site again
I always
remember
that it was the time of my life
to meet the users on here.
RavenMoonStone
you didn't make me alone
KatyaElefant
I'll thank you again.
Even the ones I've never met before
thank you, for making this web happiness galore.
Chorus
Someday I think
there's nothing existing
that's happier than being on this site.
Someday I know
I won't be here, so
I'll love you all in advance.
Thank you for the people
who created this Society
of amazing writers and friends.
Sub-chorus
I thank you, all of you
for making this Young Writers Society
the best it can be
When I'm in college
I'll miss all of you
but I know you're definitely
the most amazing
people
ever.
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I love this.
You have to record this and make it a video and post it on YouTube and I just am full of ideas of things that will never happen. But this was super good!
Was this ever in the literary spotlight?
Nope, I don't think so.
It should have!
Thanks!
You're welcome!
I love it.You perfectly summed up YWS. Everyone here is so sweet and nice.The people here encourages you and helps you.People I didn't even know were welcoming me because they just wanted to.This amazing song describes the amazing site called Young Writers Society.I have nothing to say bad about this set of lyrics.You did incredible.Good luck.
Thank you for your praise, Emrhea!
Hey you own that praise.That was incredible @wisegirl22
This is a good piece of lyrics, which probably summed up my experience in YWS. The content is successfully written to raise feelings among us- YWS readers.
As RagingLive had mentioned, in verse 2,
"I know someday that when
I'll think about this site again
I always
remember
that it was the time of my life
to meet the users on here."
I think you may want to change it as
"I know someday that when
I think about this site again
I'll always
remember
that it was the time of my life
to meet the users on here."
Just a minor change, and overall quite a joyful piece to read.
P.S. I like it here!
Thank you for reviewing! As for your comment...I do too!
Wow! This is so cool! I haven't been on YWS very long, but this pretty much sums up all that I've seen so far! Perhaps on verse 2 when you say "I'll think about this site again / I always / remember" You mean "I'll always remember"? I also kind of lost the rhythm there as well. However this is probably better than I could have done with the rhyming and all! (I know how hard that can be!) So keep writing! I'll be glad to review!
Thank you for your kind comments! I will take your suggestion into mind. Thank you again for reviewing!