DrunkOnWriting

wow. I see I'm quite late to this one so there's not much I can say in the way of helpful I'll just say WOW. Ares shifted in his seat, ...

You are SUCH a talented writer! This poem seriously almost made me cry...such powerful emotions. I don't write this well when I have writers block ;) After reading it twice, ...

hmmm...this poem seems a bit messy. You may want to clean it up a little. And I cry when no one when wipes up my messy failures and doubt and ...

A gorgeous poem, I really like the concept! Your imagery is beautiful, and the poem itself is well written. My only concern is the lack of punctuation. This is a ...

Wow, I really loved this! A very clever setup, with powerful, well written content. Nicely done! Only one thing...I think that these should be written vertically, as stanzas: Egypt, democracy ...

Very well written...how true your message is as well. Your first stanza perfectly captures the invincible teenage mindset. I really liked this, aside from the morbid topic. Just a few ...

WOW. Incredible work, wicked imagery, extremely well written. The emotions are very prominent, and the poem has that dark, wicked beauty to it...well done! As for critiquing, I couldn't really ...

Beautiful piece, I thought there could have been more to it...the poem was a bit skimpy but if you build on it you could really create something beautiful Not really ...

This was a very inspiring piece, it makes ME feel powerful just reading it! warriors walk fearless but not heedless for I'm not perfect, but I'm not worthless Great lines, ...

Wow! Beautiful, powerful, and packed with real emotion...very well written! Just one thing to add: Why must their be so much fake? It seems as though this should be "there" ...

If I tried to pick a favorite part, I would end up pasting the entire thing into this review:) The sadistic smile of the summer sun beats down on my ...

Beautiful, powerful lyrics, saturated with emotion. I really loved this! Grey clouds, move away now Clear skies, peace at mind No regrets, no forgets my favorite part :) It was ...

Wow. I absolutely LOVED this! It's beautifully tragic:) Feed me love. Spare the hate. Insanity is easy to fake. My favorite part. This was an extremely powerful poem, you are ...

Extremely powerful poem, well written and full of emotion! Just one thing bothered me about this. It seems as though there is just one stanza that isn't rhyming... Day by ...

Pretty good poem, some awkward lines made it hard for the emotion to really grasp me, but overall a nice piece of work You may want to consider breaking up ...