Published July 26, 2011
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This was pretty well written, but I kind of would like to know why the person has all of these emotions. It's really vague as to why this person feels this way. Perhaps, I missed something, but it just seems that someone is randomly saying they will not hideaway again...but from what?
This is a really good poem! I love the message it sends. And I didn't see anything wrong with it. Good job! My favorite part was the entire last verse. It seemed to flow so smoothly. I love it!!! Keep writing!
Beautiful, powerful lyrics, saturated with emotion. I really loved this!
my favorite part