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Hello Jcsmooth,Dark here with review on your poem. One more love poetry here.With simple theme and questions that often hit human feelings. But you managed to write it in your ...

Hi again conceptane,DK with review on your wonderful poem. I see the messages you want to convey here.Something that really caught my eyes with an amazing concept and ideas.But,you need ...

Hi conceptane,as you wish DK here with review on your short-essay about peace. Let's start from the first introduction of your essay; The quest for peace has been*(has become) an ...

Hi Pako, DK with review on your poem.First of all,welcome to YWS :) Giving expressions of love may seem simple, but rather it is something that needs to be fully ...

Hi Maria,DK with review :) As stated by the Wikipedia, technology is the making, modification, usage and knowledge of tools, machines, techniques, crafts, systems and methods of organization in order ...

Hi krizshelbenalycabral,as you wish,DK here to give a review.Just a few things I want to point up here,that you might overlooked . 1. Lollapalooza! Peculiar* it may seem, but this ...

Hi RachelLescano,DK with review.Just a few things I want to point up here. Introduction in your an essay quite spins on thing which already known. It's not so bad, but ...

Hi marcial,as you wish DK come to give review :) First of all,let's see at the beginning of the essay ; “One wrong move and you’ll die.” I still remember ...

Hi beezy,Dark here with review^^ I am very angry with a novel / story with no title (unless title was 'untitled')!Because it's like seeing a person without a head-horror and ...

Hi GreenLight,Dark here with review! For the first time I read the warnings and 'note from the author' that you gave, I already feel the privileges in your short story. ...

Hi Actawesome,Dark here with review. Based on the title of your short story, I think it's a self-depictions of the mother with the author himself.But I see a red warning ...

Hi pauuulinejoy,DK here with review :) I love the way you write this essay to become something 'delicious' and useful facts.Agree with some comments,so I just adding some that you ...

Hi christiantiquis,DK here with a few comments on your essay :) The essay and your writing style is so satisfying. No problem, I just need to insert what you overlooked ...

Hi Raph,DK here with review.I see that the deadline is tomorrow,so I think I need to help by giving review here :) I like your essay here,no comment on the ...

Hi AiraPatricia,DK here with review on your informative essay. TECHY. What comes to your mind when you hear the word “Techy”? Do you think it even exist in the dictionary? ...