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Re: jogging in the rain
Greetings, I'm Thorn and I'll be reviewing for you today. The first thing that made me think was how the words form on the mouth. All of it's very basic ...
Jul 19, 2020 -
Re: Modern Witches of Toronto-Story 2: Quincy and the Ghost
Greetings, I'm Thorn and I'll be reviewing for you today. The way you introduced the main character was lazy. It was basically a dump of information and very little detail ...
Jul 18, 2020 -
Re: A Healer, A Dictator, A Scary Old Lady: Sinestra Hopkins-Jones
Greetings. I'm Thorn and I'll be reviewing for you. If I'm honest, this is very confusing. I don't really understand what the exact theme is as it goes from this ...
Jul 18, 2020 -
Re: My Essay on Dizzy Dean (1925 Words)
Greetings! I'm Thorn and I'll be reviewing for you today. I haven't reviewed an essay before, so this should be fun to read. I am not as interested in sports ...
Jul 17, 2020 -
Re: a question to society part one
Greetings! I'm Thorn and I'll be reviewing for you today. This really isn't an essay. Well, it could be considered one if you try hard enough, but it's more a ...
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Prologue
Greetings! I'm Thorn and I'll be reviewing for you today. The first thing that stole my attention was the personal notes. If you have to explain a part of what ...
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: Chapter #2
Greetings fellow writer, I'm Thorn, and I'll be reviewing for you today. I haven't read the previous part of this, which I most likely should, but a good chapter is ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows Prologue
Greetings fellow writer, I'm Thorn, and I'll be reviewing for you today. I'd like to say that your detail is wonderful. It's fresh and creative, but still calm enough to ...
Jul 10, 2020 -
Re: Two - Tied To A Brick.
Greetings fellow writer, I'm Thorn, and I'll be reviewing for you today. Overall meaning is executed greatly with the metaphors, but I believe that your formatting choices take away from ...
Jul 10, 2020 -
Re: Modern Witches of Toronto-Story 1: Laplace's Demon(Edited version)
Greetings fellow writer, I'm Thorn, and I'll be reviewing for you today. I believe that needing to say the full name after introducing them shouldn't happen. If you write the ...
Jul 10, 2020 -
Re: Sunshine
Greetings fellow writer, I'm Thorn, and I'll be reviewing for you today. ---->Some lines are simple and quite shorter than the others, which usually are full of detail and imagery ...
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Discovery
Greetings fellow writer, I'm Thorn, and I'll be reviewing this today for you. I don't have much to really say about this because of the length, or lack of it. ...
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Accept Me
Greetings fellow writer, I'm Thorn, and I'll be reviewing for you. As it was said before, the flow is quite off from the usage of punctuation that is similar and ...
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: First few chapters of Springheart!
Greetings fellow writer, I am Thorn, and I'll be reviewing this work of yours. Sit back and buckle up because I am speeding into this one. I believe that putting ...
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Before the Escape
Greetings fellow writer, I'm Thorn, and I'll be reviewing this little thing. Buckle up and sit back because I'm speeding into this. My opinion of this is how it's written. ...
Jul 7, 2020
