Dracula

Hello! Here's a short review... From the darkness and a cruelness Which those bad memories made you become I think it might sound better if the second line was... Which ...

Me again! This paragraph... The spider lady hissed in pain and foam slithered from her mouth on the floor, probably mixed with drool from her "meal". She advanced so close ...

It is me, jazzydracula, again! Yep, I'm back. I rubbed my eyes, and woke up to find an ugly face. Where did he find the ugly face? In front of ...

Well here I am. :) I might mention things which other reviewers have already said, but ah well. I write as I read. Here goes... When I read that first ...

Hello! I'm here to review! I'll start with the nitpicks... First of all, you could probably stretch out your blocks of words into smaller paragraphs. One paragraph equals one thought. ...

I'm back, again. You can probably tell by now that I really enjoy your writing. Nico had shadow-traveled us here, and gave us directions to the Central Park. You need ...

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT ...

Hello, Wisegirl! Gods I love Percy Jackson fanfictions! Naturally, then, I like this. I will, however, do my absolute best to help you make it perfection. The first nitpick I ...

Hello! I've come to review on behalf of Team Green, The Mystery Machine! First of all, I better point out that I have not read any other chapters of your ...

Let's get right to it... She hunted for the light, drinking rain as some drink wine, hoping to catch a sun drop that evaded her tired eyes. But she couldn't ...

Wow. Did you actually write this? I know you did write it, I'm just using that phrase to say that it is so amazingly accurate and fantastic. I love it. ...

Hello! I'm here to review. It took me forever to find something to mention in here. I'm so glad I found a nitpick. :P “I’m not sure,” I say nonchalantly, ...

Hello! I'm here for Team Green, The Mystery Machine. :) Rose... Rose... Rose... This poem was a lot more painful than it was probably meant to be. Does the name ...

Hello! I've come to review this on behalf of Team Green, The Mystery Machine. :) The room got more and more blurry... If you're just spilling out emotions, then please ...

Hello! I'm here to review for the Green Team, Mystery Machine. :) I still can't believe that you really have abandoned me. You left me helpless and my heart, since ...