Dracula

Hello and Happy Review Day! I haven't read the Prologue so I'll be looking for typos and errors rather than reviewing the actual story. Adonia's hands still gripped his shoulders ...

Hello and Happy Review Day!!! I see that you've indented and spaced lines to show a new paragraph/sentence. I know it probably looks completely different on a word document, but ...

Heya, I'm here as requested! Happy Review Day, by the way. :) Jude’s eyes slowly faded as the morning light shone through the door.He had been up all night You ...

Hello! I don't watch/read/play/whatever Attack On Titan. :P So I'm just going to look for typos and nitpicks. By the way, Happy Review Day! The first things I see are ...

Here I am to review this for you! I did like this piece quite a lot. I found the story within a story a little confusing at first, but after ...

Hey! I'm here to review. :) and you've flow that route more times I believe it should say flown ? the world home itself almost needs The world home doesn't ...

Hmm. Well since I believe in something I can't really agree with this poem. But it's certainly well written. I have one nitpick, though... Souls are invisible Intangible Free Yet ...

Hey! I'll just point out errors that I find. the girl pondered events from the night before just as she had lying awake in her bed. Lying doesn't make sense ...

Hello! I don't know anything about the story this was inspired by so I'm just going to look for errors in here. Otherwise I think I'll get confused. :P Stonemout ...

Heya, I'm here to review. :) “You tell me every night! I will be okay!” I said. I think it makes more sense if she shouts it instead of saying. ...

Hey! I'm a bit behind on chapters but I know I've read a bit of this fanfiction. So I'll just review this... should've collaborated with Ares-actually, on that thought, he ...

Heya, I might not be able to get through this whole thing but I'll point out any errors that I find as I go. I had become quite fluent, and ...

I love this! And I laugh it and live it.;) It really makes me consider how the world is so messed up nowadays and how we all just need to ...

Hello! I'll just quickly read through this and then give you my suggestion. :) or that the last thing she imagined was the smile of a forgotten face race through ...

Helloooooo fellow demigod! I absolutely love your username. :) Persassybeth ftw. The first thing i notice is the lack of capital I s! i can see that you've written the ...