Dracula

Heya, Pan! I'm here to write a helpful review (hopefully you'll find it helpful). When I read the first stanza, I was going to correct you on starting two lines ...

Hey, it's me again! :D I slid my self father towards the end of the chair and lean in. Farther* “Adilse is her name.” I say with a wide grin. ...

Okay, I'm back! I wonder why she is so popular? Is it because she is pretty or that she is not from the south nor from our small quaint town? ...

Hello, Zee! I was going to review one of your later chapters, but I thought I'd better start from the beginning. I'll just write short reviews for chapter one and ...

Dreams are absolutely amazing, and you portrayed that brilliantly with lines like the last line, dreams--dreams--his flew higher than the sky , and a droplet of water in a billion ...

Nice formatting. :p It was interesting to read a diary entry, as it's not something I often find on YWS. You wrote it very well, like you were the character ...

Well, these are certainly very random. :p I suppose this was just for fun, right? So I won't go into a heap of nitpicks. When I read the first one ...

Hello! I've not got much to say that hasn't already been mentioned, so I'll keep this short. I really liked the language that you used. It made the poem seem ...

This is a cute and humorous poem. At first I was thinking what is actually happening right now, I am so confused but then the last two lines made complete ...

You've written the character's point of view so well. I felt scared, relieved and a whole range of emotions for her throughout the story. I also got a chance to ...

Hey, Cynder! The chapter was action packed and I found your story very interesting. Now to review it. Well, I have a few nitpicks, but nothing major. I was reminded ...

Hey, Kanome. :D This poem portrayed a lot of emotion; anger, hopelessness, sadness. The imagery is beautifully written, if not extremely dark, but as with everything, there is a beauty ...

This was a lovely poem! It's amazing how you've taken the nickname 'Tomato' (which is often an insult to those who blush a lot) and turned it into something romantic. ...

Wow! This is extremely relatable (as all the comments below confirm). I laughed so hard at the end, after you realised that the power switch had just been turned off. ...

Hey, I came to review but it's going to be a very short one. I couldn't find any grammar mistakes and I have absolutely no nitpicks! Your chapter was beautifully ...