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Re: Prologue/ Chapter 1 (also on Wattpad)
Guess who..... yep, it's Dracula again! This review won't be long, but hopefully it'll be helpful. :D The name doesn't do this place justice. This place is more than just ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Kelpie - Character Descriptions
Hey there, AmyMedek, it's me again. :) Woah, this is a big one. Time to learn about your characters! Appears to be of Irish/Scottish or British heritage (though not even ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Kelpie - summary and other things that may be in the books
Hey there, AmyMedek, and happy review day! I'm not really sure how to review this, since it's just ideas. I guess I'll type down my thoughts as I read through ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Save Yourself
Hey there! I really liked this short story, it was interesting and well written. A few things stood out to me, which I'll write about below. She knew it wasn’t ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: Life is Death
Hey there, milabales11, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! :) She lays there screaming from the aching pain of child on its way. I love how you start this ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: The Great Unknown
Hey there, Cl0wn6! I'm here for a short review. I really like your topic at the beginning of this, I agree with every word; that it's important to question authority, ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: Prologue: untitled (to be decided)
Hey there, Remembrance! Dracula is here to review. :) Your imagery was really good throughout this prologue. The way Melissa reacted to the curse was especially good, I like this ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: To-do
Hey there! I thought I'd read this because I thought the idea of basing poetry off a 'to-do' list was pretty clever. I'm not disappointed! This piece is so unique ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: Monster
Hey there, JKH! This is really short, but I really enjoyed it! It's a great little piece of flash fiction. Some areas are lacking in description, such as the beginning. ...
Nov 12, 2016 -
Re: The Two Brothers (Part 3)
For his quiet, isolated life meant the farthest away news he ever heard was only ever one or two bridges away, depending on the weather. This bit needs to be ...
Nov 10, 2016 -
Re: Tainted
Hey there, rawritszoe, and WELCOME to the Young Writer's Society! I know that you'll love it here. :) “Bellus Praelia, born on the twelfth day of the 7th month known ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: Hidden From Me: Prologue
Hey there, OreosAreLife, I'm here to review. :) I love oreos, by the way. I try and break free to run from the pain, but I cannot. I don't understand ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: Shadowsong: Chapter 1.1
Hello, featherstone9086! I'm here to review. :) Who knows? Who will ever know? Who would want to know? I absolutely love that first paragraph. All the different thoughts and ideas, ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: Cats and Dogs.
Hey there, PusheenTheCat! This is a really cute piece, I just have a few things to point out. What do they do in there free time? There should actually say ...
Nov 9, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Five
Hey there, TheOneNamedZoe, I'm here to review! :) I've got a couple of things to point out. "Now that everyone is here," Xáos announced. "We must now all stand." The ...
Nov 8, 2016
