Cats? What do they do in there free time? Well from what I could see from my own cat all she does is just lay around and sleep until it is time to eat. Also I would say that cats would be more fun for a person that doesn't like dogs because they are more gentile and aren't as mean as dogs, plus I would say that most of the world has cats. Then you could also say that dogs are better because they don't have to go every where in the whole world but they do have to go outside and play, and go to the bathroom, and clean up if they make a mess after entering a room after going to the bathroom.
Plus if you ask me my cat is one of the nicest cats in the whole world because she doesn't go to the bathroom outside and she is very lazy ( which I like ) also she just cries when we aren't in the house or if we aren't playing with her. Another thing that I would say is that most of the dogs that I have encountered are very very mean and I am not saying anything mean about the people who do have dogs but I would say that the dogs that I meet are mean. Well you might say yeah maybe they come from a house with owners that weren't nice to them, or there a watch dog, etc. All I am trying to say is that I am not a big dog lover.
For people who are I respect you and I would like to ask you in the review tell me what your dog does if you have one and if you have a cat you could do the same thing there is no difference. I would also like to say that I like some dogs just not all of them. One last thing before I go is that I respect all cats and dogs.
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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
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Hmm, well I was expecting something a little bit different after seeing that title, perhaps to do with rain, but it seems this one is genuinely capturing the literal meaning that we were going for there. That's quite something here, I don't believe I saw that one coming. At any rate, this is off to an neat little start here with a bit of a comparison going down there to introduce what I assume is the general tone this will be going with.
Okay, this is taking on a rather personal note here as we're going. It seems this is not necessarily an objective comparison of cats and dogs, but rather something of an observation based on personal experience here. That does certainly work I think, because it does now give this piece more of a unique flavor. Well, let's see this how this ends, at the moment I see a relatively clear direction but there is always room for a twist.
Hmm, well it ends off in more or less the way I expected, although it was intriguing to discover that the first two paragraphs are all we get as far as comparison is concerned. I do like that ending at any rate to sort of showcase that you are relatively neutral on the subject of cats and dogs and this is simply the experience you've had. I think that makes for an interesting ending here and caps of this piece fairly well. Its no the biggest or most informative, but its a fun read about what seems to be interesting life experiences.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
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Hey there, PusheenTheCat! This is a really cute piece, I just have a few things to point out.
I have both a cat and dog, and they're both treated like my brother and sister. My cat is cheeky and thinks she's queen, but she still gives me cuddles all the time (and expects them). My dog loves to play all the time, and he talks a lot. I love them both tremendously.
What do they do in there free time?
There should actually say 'their'. There is referring to a place, while 'their' is referring to people (or in this case, cats).
Well from what I could see from my own cat all she does is just lay around and sleep until it is time to eat.
This sounds exactly like my cat. And if you don't provide her with food she'll start using you as a scratching post. She scratches you lovingly, of course.
Plus if you ask me my cat is one of the nicest cats in the whole world because she doesn't go to the bathroom outside
I think you should clarify why going to the bathroom inside is a good thing. I know that your cat probably uses a litter tray, which is a good way to keep the place clean. Most people might think that a cat doing its business inside is a bad thing.
or there a watch dog
There needs to become 'they're'. They are can be shortened to they're, while 'there' is once again referring to the place.
For people who are I respect you and I would like to ask you in the review tell me what your dog does if you have one and if you have a cat you could do the same thing there is no difference.
Some sentences throughout this could be shorter, and I've shortened this one as an example. You could split it up like this: For people who are I respect you. I would like to ask you in the review tell me what your dog does, if you have one, and if you have a cat you could do the same thing. There is no difference.
One last thing before I go is that I respect all cats and dogs.
Good on you for saying this.
First off I thought this was sweet. I personally am a dog person, but I also have a cat and I love him to death! In the spirit of this being a review I have a few corrections in terms of grammar and punctuation.
"What do they do in there free time?" there should be their. That's a tricky one, but "their" would mean what the cats do in their free time.
"Also I would say-" After also you should add a comma "Also, I would say-" Helps with the flow.
"more gentile" gentile has something to do with Jewish religion, I believe the correct word would be "gentle"
"go every where" everywhere is one word
"Well you might say" After well there should be a comma "Well, you might say"
"or there a watch dog" Watchdog is one word
I really liked your work, and I hope to read more of it!