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Re: Trust
Oh myy I'm soo sorry for youu. Believe me, i know what you're going through,,,going through the same thing right now myself...I hope you get better soon. All the best. ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Fair-weather Friend
Oh ! What a poem ! At first, it was kind of confusing 'cause it started with two voices. SO to answer your question yes, I really think you should ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Deadly Dream
I liked this poem. Really nice and I especially loved the rhymes girl!! :)...I also liked the way you describe how death will slowly creep in...love the title too :) ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Invisible
This is an awesome piece. I just loved it ! Really...amazing and creative. I liked the way you first introduce the girl and then how you are suddenly questioning the ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Tribulation
Wow. Awesome poem. I loved the rhymes. Sometimes, I feel that way too. But just know that sooner or later things will shine for you :) No worries ;)
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: I hate my father
Wow. I jsut loved it ! It was a litte confusing at first thoug..try making your writing clearer next time and add more details to make it even more interesting ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Once You Were My Best Friend
Wow. So soryy for you :( Maybe she had a reason for what she's doing? :/ eitherway your poem really touched me. I loved the way i could feel your ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: "Dear Cloud" Poem
Nice poem :) I love the rhymes...(i just have something with rhymes rly -__-) They're beautiful..and i admire to way you used them here. Remeber re-read what you write...you have ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: The changes within
Beautiful, simply beautiful ! Love the emotions which seem to be tumbling out in a rush. Maybe you could have had some more paragraphs?...'Cause it's really nice ! :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Heartbreak
WOw ! o_o SOunds like some of the things i write -_- Just that yours is PERFECTO ! ;) You have talent man...wow. I like the way you could feel ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Psyche
Haha :) I love this poem? I liked the ending, it made me smile :) Keep up the good work, i have nothing bad to say about it! :)
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: I Wasn't Ready To Leave
Wow ! Thsi was a really sad but beautiful poem. I really felt sad thanks to your ability to convey emotion to the reader ! :) But be careful with ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Dear Anna (Poetry Pairs)
Wow ! I loved this poem. I liked the description you put inside, how the soldeir feels. The guilt he has which is weighing him down. The way he knows ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Just let me be
Heyy i loved this poem ! Especially the rhymes ! :) Looks like the kind of thing i do too :) And um i think it should be 'Just LET ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: How Can I?
Oh this is a nice poem. I liked the amount of emotion poured inside; I was able to feel the writer's pain and frustration. I especially liked this part: Tell ...
Apr 4, 2011