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Re: I won.
Thank you very much.
May 7, 2006 -
Re: Lone Lee
Removing myself from the character would pretty much kill the whole poem... all the inspiration would be gone. Lee's my middle name by the way. And no, I don't like ...
May 5, 2006 -
Re: Aligator bird -writing challenge 4 /17
I went into this suspecting the worst so it hardly phased me. I really do hope that was supposed to be humour though...
May 1, 2006 -
Re: Alaska.
Bravo. Bravo. And you were skeptical about your skills. Blasphemy! Excellent.
Apr 28, 2006 -
Re: Expressionless Emotions
Thankyou. Anyone else?
Apr 26, 2006 -
Re: Naked Afternoon
Wow, your poems are good. Great. Excellent. Fantastic. Uber. Take your pick.
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: Sensory Defecation
It's excellent and very eye-opening, so to speak. It's good to see more poems like this. Really. Great stuff.
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: Eyes
I'm not really one for rhyming because usually it's cheesy, but this is a definate exception. Good work.
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: Dusk outside of the teenage body
Deep and very relate-to-able. Beautiful in every sense of the word. Keep up the good work.
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: Say Good-Bye to the Music Man
Perfect description that matched the concept imaculately. Good job.
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: Beautiful Imperfections
That was terrific. Really, it was. :thumb: I can't pick a favourite part because.. well, I'd rather not seperate awesome lines from awesome-er ones. Hah. In case that my response ...
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: A lack of color...
I just love poetry that describes colour or uses colour to describe other things. Your poem was no different. Keep up the good work.
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: Opposites, Subtract!
Hmm. I see what you're all getting at. I did try to hard I think. But nonetheless it's an inside thing, like all poems I guess, and it really does ...
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: Your Third Eye
You wrote that very elegantly. I really liked it. I've never heard TOOL, but I think I know what you mean about the abstract weirdness of certain music helping you ...
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: Animal Farm
The end was very moving I thought. A good, tragic book. Loved it.
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