Divya

Hey! It's a really good poem you have written. I think it's because of the use of rhyming words used in proper places, your poem is really good to read ...

Hey! thought to drop by to give a review. I found your poem a bit different from what others write. The concept that you are talking about a tongue twister ...

Hi! Would like to give you some criticism there! I find your poem to be unique. The way blood is compared to pen's ink, red wine....it's great. It never occurred ...

It's a good poem. The metaphors used in the poem are amazing. But I would like to suggest one thing. You could add much more depth to the poem. After ...

Hmm...well the story was good but still it didn't give me the chills. Some mistakes I will point you out. "However had gotten into my house and stuck the letter ...

Well...I found the story humorous and enjoyed reading it. On top of that, it's short. Also the description you gave of the boy staring at the girl was pretty good. ...

Okay, the story was really good. Enough to give me chills, as you mentioned in the story but that's probably because I am a coward. Found a bit mistakes which ...

Okay, let me tell you, I really liked reading this poem. It's better honestly to have imaginary friends than real ones. This is because our so called friends ditch us ...

Well the poem was simple and sweet. One can clearly understand what you want to express and that comes out nicely in the poem. But the poem is too simple ...

Your poem was really good and deeply emotional. I have written a lot of dark poems so I can understand the emotions and how you feel. The only line I ...

Hmmm... It's a good poem. It was emotional and throughout the poem you were so positive. Good to see that! Well If I were to criticize something, I would say ...

Hmm... I found it difficult to understand the meaning of this poem. Though it was good to read it. The only problem is you haven't used capital letters in your ...

Well, I liked the way, the poem was. It was rhyming. The emotions were quite clearly expressed. But I didn't understand the last line' "I deserved better." Did the boy ...

Hmm... Found the poem really deep. But there are small mistakes in your poem. You never used capital letters before you start to write something, you know. I found the ...

Wow! It's a really emotional poem. If I am not wrong, every time you felt depressed, you would resort to slitting your wrists and then regret it. I think you ...