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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: The Quest for Fire Book One ~ Into the Mists Chapter 1

    Hiya, Fel :) Wow, you sure have a lot of reviews here, there isn't much I can help with. I'll look at all your chapters though, in the course of ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The heart of an Eve_ Chapter 1: forced marriage

    Hey there, welcome to YWS! Desdemona here, proud to be Giving you your first review! I have a very strong liking for futuristic fiction. Combined with angsty teenagers, this work ...

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Other Re: Lies and Deceit- Chapter 1

    Hi there. Desdemona here to drop a review. Very interesting story you've got here, though the tenses you used were really confusing to me. One minute, you're in the past ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Humor Re: The Way of the World

    :3 Hi there, Desdemona here to drop a review. I really like this poem :) It's incredibly inspiring to me. I just looked at my chemistry homework and went "FORWARD ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Arguments and Misplaced Distrust

    Hi there :) Desdemona here to drop a review! What a lovely poem! I must say I've never encountered this particular genre (not genera) of poetry, but I really like ...

    May 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Changing States ~Chapter 1~

    Hi there :) Desdemona here, to drop a review :) What an amazing post-revolution series! I've seen about a million of these and I'll probably see 100 million more. Things ...

    May 31, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: black thoughts

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS! Enjoy your stay!! :) My name is Izzah, and I'm thrilled to be giving you your first review. As a girl who has been ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: (Unnamed)

    Well well, guess it's your turn to suffer the wrath of my penc- er keyboard. Yes. Keyboard. Hello, I'm Desdemona (but you already know that) and I'm here to drop ...

    May 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Life

    Hello~ I'm Desdemona and I'm here to review your work. I noticed you're new here, welcome aboard!!! I'm thrilled to be giving you your first review

    May 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The two lovers under the tamarind tree...

    Bonjour, je suis le chat noir. Hello, I'm BlackCatXx and I'm here to review you :) I didn't mind the "stupid style" as you call it. It's a very common ...

    Apr 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Looking Glass

    Bonjour, je suis le chat noir :) Hello, I'm BlackCatXx and I'm here to review you!! I enjoy reading poetry, even though I can't write anything except haikus for the ...

    Apr 19, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A city at night

    Bonjour, je suis le chat noir!~ Hello, I'm BlackCatXx and I'm here to drop you a review!! In English class, I've had to write heaps and heaps of essays and ...

    Apr 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Culture Re: Turning Point

    Bonjour, je suis le chat noir. Hello, I'm BlackCatXx, and I'm here to drop a review. I have always been drawn to stories which took place in worlds so similar, ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Every Christmas - Chapter 1

    Hello~ Blackie ish here to review you~! I'm quite impressed with your story, given your age and all. I especially liked the little twist in the end, I do love ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Forbidden Project: Chapter 1, Part One

    Hello, this is Blackie here to review you!~ Firstly, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed reading though this story. It has a good solid plot behind it, and ...

    Aug 31, 2015


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