Denizen

Hi! Hope you're having a wonderful day. I happened across this piece in the green room-It caught my eye, although I have yet to read any of the previous chapters. ...

Hi there! I found your work through the green room, and I have to say, its astonishing! The different types of love... what an interesting topic! Familial love, romantic love, ...

Hi! I hope you're having a good day-or night, haha. To start with-wow. The technique, the use of repetition, even if simple, is extremely effective. I admire how you've managed ...

Ok, this is wonderful. You hit the mark when it comes to comedy, at least for me. I adore the misdirect. I also love how you've successfully implied the cuss ...

This is deep. To put it nice and simply. I can tell there's a lot of depth to this work, which I enjoy. You've used some nice language, and the ...

oooh chilling. There's a lot to dive into here. The overall poem is quite beautiful-The questions of destiny, freedom, morality, society, potential, it links together well while also providing a ...

This poem was a good read-powerful and emotive. I particularly enjoy the repeating motif of fire and tears, the contrast between the two working well to reflect the ferocity of ...

What wonderful use of punctuation! The short, stunning sentences are extremely powerful, and the pauses induced by the lack of periods creates a slow, tense read, one I enjoyed. I ...

This is heartbreaking. Poor little Tim-Eddie is wonderful, and I, even just as a reader, can relate to his struggle to hold in his emotions and act calm. I enjoy ...

Woah-I love this??? It's oddly abstract, in a nice way. There's a gentle vagueness to it, a soft air of mystery, with a wonderful moment of realisation at the end. ...

Chills. Literal chills. This is beautiful-if subtly dark. I adore the way you've handled the subject matter, in such a delicate manner, with a mass of wonderful imagery. You've succeeded ...

I love the motif of flying. I sounds angelic. I can read a lot of meaning from this-and I quite like the message, of freedom, of longing, of having the ...

Ah, this is great. I do so love a tragedy~ I feel a sufficient amount of empathy for our protagonist, and can understand his emotions well-the grief, the guilt, the ...

Wow, I love these. I'm given such a sense of sombre nostalgia. I particularly love the second poem. There are some minor issues grammatically-but other than that, the effect of ...