Demoness

No... i didnt like this very much. I guess it could be good but there was no emotion, you need to describe more and on more than one place the ...

Aoow, Touchy Poem! Allhough there were quite many spelling mistakes and it ruined the whole thing a little and sometimes the rythm got a bit unregular and so on. But ...

Wow... this was confusing... I don't think i have anything to add that hasnt allready been said but yeah you gotta work on the stanzas and rythms... But I still ...

I think this was a really good poem overall... all though the end confused me a little and lowered the standard... My love, i don't hate you anymore For leaving ...

Aoow.. This was really good and full of emotions. I think there could be done some smaller changes to improve it but they have all, allready been mentioned so part ...

EPIC! I must say, this was one of the best poem i've ever read.. Am a bit jelouse... would have wanted to write it myself. So... well, I don't have ...

Aow, This poem was awesome, and the way you built it up was very interesting. The whole thing flowed very well and i liked that last line very much. Also ...

Happy, happy, happy! That's the way I am, Laughing, grinning, giggles! I smile because I can! (This stanza have got the marks wrong, you should have a comma in the ...

I'm not a believer, but neither do i have anything against believers, but i dislike those you discribe, those who cant accept somebody elses way of thinking. I thought this ...

Hm... I think I like this pretty much, but I dont think you should build up the peom the way you did. The Stanzas got a different amount of lines ...

[quote="x3CoFx3"] This is an allegorical poem I wrote about attempted and failed suicide. Hm... This was interesting, it was confusing but still, interesting. Though some sentences never seemed to end

Wow, I really liked this one. It was different, but very interesting and I liked it really much. And the "Twisting, Turning, Crying" part was very clever, good work. You ...

It's definentely something most people can relate too, so it got a real good message, and overall I think it was a very good poem. Though I dont understand the ...

Allthrough, I liked this poem, and the rhymes were very promising. Though as others said above, I never understood what it was all about, what "LIE" are you talking about ...

Ooh, it was really good. And so true, perfection is truly no more then an illusion, and not even a good one. I'm not very good on revising things.... Cause ...