Demoness

Hello, I'm Demoness, welcome to YWS by the way! I like the simplicity of this piece, al though I think it could have more depth. As it is, it's pretty ...

Hello! Some here think you don't belong here, and I do see their points. Though this is a site for ALL young writers, a chance for them to improve and ...

Good Evening! A Demon here to give your piece a fair glance :) First and foremost; It was a good poem! I like the sweetness in it and it put ...

Hello there Courtlyn, and welcome to YWS, it's only the best site ever... My name is Saga and I'll be giving you my hopefully helpful opinion on this piece. First ...

Hello Hello a Demon has come to give you a review! So, I really liked this, the language was a bit dry and it would be easier to read if ...

Hello there, RainGrae, I'm Demoness and I'm here to review your piece of poetry :) So here goes; To begin with I think that you might have put a little ...

Hello dear Bandit! Demonic review incoming! So, to begin with, this isn't awful, it's quite genious actually, but flawed. I like your plot, and the message is brilliant. What it ...

Hello! So, as promised, here comes the Demon with her rusty reviewing skills... Oh yes, she hasn't been doing this for a while. First of all, I don't think you ...

Pweeeetyy amazing poem written by pweeeetty amazing writers! I didn't come to give you this loong and helpful review because I need to get back to packing that suitecase. BUT, ...

This is an amazing poem. It was a little spooky though as it felt as if it whispered to me and I held my breath reading it. I don't feel ...

Hello Storiee! Been a while since I reviewed but I came into it today again so lets give it a try :) First of all, I really, reaaally liked this ...

This is beautiful. I can't really put my finger on why! But it really clicked with me. It started out a little dull I must admitt, just words telling a ...

Hello there Tara, and Welcome to YWS! I'm Demoness and I'll be your reviewer today :) So, a cute little piece we have here. As far as the rythm and ...

Hallow, Demoness here to give you a little advice This is an interesting piece. It has got some colorful lines and curious twist to it. Allthough I agree with the ...

Hello Anna! I'm Demoness and congratulations, of ALL the works on YWS yours will be the first I review this end-of-the-world-year of 2012! So, well, I'll get to it. First ...