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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: A torn note

    Hello, I'm Demoness, welcome to YWS by the way! I like the simplicity of this piece, al though I think it could have more depth. As it is, it's pretty ...

    Jan 6, 2014

  • Art » Historical Fiction, Politics
    Re: i rule da streetz

    Hello! Some here think you don't belong here, and I do see their points. Though this is a site for ALL young writers, a chance for them to improve and ...

    Jan 6, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Mediated Thought

    Good Evening! A Demon here to give your piece a fair glance :) First and foremost; It was a good poem! I like the sweetness in it and it put ...

    Aug 27, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Working Title: Withering

    Hello there Courtlyn, and welcome to YWS, it's only the best site ever... My name is Saga and I'll be giving you my hopefully helpful opinion on this piece. First ...

    Jan 14, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: A list of things I will not ask you

    Hello Hello a Demon has come to give you a review! So, I really liked this, the language was a bit dry and it would be easier to read if ...

    Jan 13, 2013

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Misery

    Hello there, RainGrae, I'm Demoness and I'm here to review your piece of poetry :) So here goes; To begin with I think that you might have put a little ...

    Jan 13, 2013

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The First Marks

    Hello dear Bandit! Demonic review incoming! So, to begin with, this isn't awful, it's quite genious actually, but flawed. I like your plot, and the message is brilliant. What it ...

    Nov 20, 2012

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: Broken Vessel

    Hello! So, as promised, here comes the Demon with her rusty reviewing skills... Oh yes, she hasn't been doing this for a while. First of all, I don't think you ...

    Nov 20, 2012

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: A Sailor's House

    Pweeeetyy amazing poem written by pweeeetty amazing writers! I didn't come to give you this loong and helpful review because I need to get back to packing that suitecase. BUT, ...

    Sep 23, 2012

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re:

    This is an amazing poem. It was a little spooky though as it felt as if it whispered to me and I held my breath reading it. I don't feel ...

    Sep 5, 2012

  • Poetry » Culture, General
    Re: Another Lost Generation

    Hello Storiee! Been a while since I reviewed but I came into it today again so lets give it a try :) First of all, I really, reaaally liked this ...

    Jul 19, 2012

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: We want her

    This is beautiful. I can't really put my finger on why! But it really clicked with me. It started out a little dull I must admitt, just words telling a ...

    Jul 19, 2012

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: 2/11/12

    Hello there Tara, and Welcome to YWS! I'm Demoness and I'll be your reviewer today :) So, a cute little piece we have here. As far as the rythm and ...

    Jul 19, 2012

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Deleted

    Hallow, Demoness here to give you a little advice This is an interesting piece. It has got some colorful lines and curious twist to it. Allthough I agree with the ...

    Mar 18, 2012

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Google Knows...

    Hello Anna! I'm Demoness and congratulations, of ALL the works on YWS yours will be the first I review this end-of-the-world-year of 2012! So, well, I'll get to it. First ...

    Jan 2, 2012


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